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Reviews for The Bet

By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - imayb1 on November 12, 2005
    That is one of the absolute funniest Gravi stories I've read in a long time. There were so many elements that I wouldn't have thought would work (like thought bubbles everyone else can see)-- and yet, the way you've written them, they DO work. You are a talented writer. The story was just wonderful. Thank you for writing and sharing it. :D
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  • From ANON - natasha on November 10, 2005
    your great story kept me laughing
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  • From ANON - sesshomaruslover132 on November 09, 2005
    That has to be one of the best stories i've ever read! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 05, 2005
    THAT WAS F***ING GREAT!!!! There simply is no other way to say it. Again I bow to your greatness! The talking dicks had to be the best and funniest part! Tho the snapshots at the end are my favorite parts of your writing style, the talking dicks win the award for best characters!! :D Loved it, loved it, loved it!!! Dear Lord I nearly passed out during the last chapter with all the bishies in the bed getting busy together!!! *falls again into drooling fangirl stupor* Please write more! Maybe this time something involving K and Hiro!! Yay-ah!
    You're the best!! *glomp*
    Koneko
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  • From ANON - jarm on November 04, 2005
    Well done, but what about Naked Spanking Sunday:)
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  • From ANON - Luciology on November 04, 2005
    A most entertaining tale full of wit that certainly had me laughing out loud. Favourite moments were: Tatsuha sorting through his 'sex' music - I haven't heard of Kenny Loggins in years, the naked tag sequence and Tatsuha's dick's battle strategies. :)
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  • From ANON - Deity on November 03, 2005
    That was an amzing story......absolutely amazing. I loved it, I can even begin to describe how over-joyed I am that you wrote it..................Keep up the excellent work, and well. Write to you some other time.............................
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  • From ANON - Crimson on November 03, 2005
    That was pure genius. That end, I mean...damn. Something about Shuuichi and Ryuuichi kissing at the climax (pun fully intended) really finished it well for me. I loved every minute, laughed so hard, and just...oh, must put this with my faves. So good. Be proud. Humor AND good sex. You go!
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  • From PatoSan on November 03, 2005
    Well, a friend of mine recommended this story to me and, after not reading any Gravi for months, I decided to give it a try. I'm so gald that I did! I'm now listening to Pink and reminescing over the great images your fic concocted in my brain. This fic was probably the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I congratulate you, it was hilarious. It was also very hot at the end.

    This is the first time I read a fic with those two couples together on a bed, and I enjoyed it a lot more than I thought I would. Big kudos to you for the whole fic.
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  • From ANON - YaoiBunny on November 03, 2005
    may I have the privalege to say that was absolutely hot....I have never enjoyed a fic of this calibur as I have enjoyed this one
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  • From ANON - caliadragon@gmail.com on November 03, 2005
    This was sexy and hilarious! Two exquisit combinations. I love the way that you write and I am off to read more.


    Thanks
    Calia
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  • From on November 02, 2005
    This is one of the most hilarious pieces I have ever read!

    The personalities of the penises and ego, the penis singing 'nobody knows the trouble I've seen', the sex-starved brothers, the sex-starved lovers, all the interactions and silliness - just priceless!
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  • From ANON - Eiri Yuki on November 01, 2005
    I loved the story, it was great. Very dramatic, I love Yuki and Shuichi they are my favorite couple. But I also like Ryu and Tatusha. I love the way you combined the four of them at the end together in the bed. It was definately my favorite part. If you make another story like this about the four of them let me know.
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  • From ANON - evilqueen13 on November 01, 2005
    I bet you never lose when it comes to talking smack! "like a drag queen at a shoe sale". HA! I love the interplay between the brothers and their dicks. I can't stop laughing! Pure fucking geniusness (if that's even a word) Man that's the shit!

    *dies from laughter*
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  • From Ashcat on November 01, 2005
    Wow.. this was another cute and hillarious fic! I'm so glad you posted it! I hope you continue to write gravitation stories!
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