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By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - Carmen on October 26, 2005
    That was amazing!!!xD I was basically rolling on the floor laughing hysterically through the whole story.I loved it!!It's good to torture Yuki and Tatsuha once in a while.^_^ Oh dear god,it's well over midnight and I've to wake up early.I just had to read the whole thing!!
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  • From ANON - no name for now on October 07, 2005
    Oh. My. God...

    Wow...
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  • From ANON - sophie on October 03, 2005
    some one please for the love of god do a fanart picture of ryuichi and shuichi kissing when then men are doing them *swoons* this was the best fanfic i have ever read and i love your stories very interesting and i love the way you add things in such as the ending credit photos and in your other fanfic before this one the bit where all the men are walking dramaticly to the song eye of the tiger ^^ i was laughing so very heard XD it was good

    and wow the detailes you give i practicly had to contain myself when you wrote such wonderfully delitful scenes XD i especialy love how ry turned to ryuichi ^^ very sexy and a huge turn on XD....can i say that.

    i look forwards to reading more fanfics ^^
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  • From ANON - Ultimecia029 on September 17, 2005
    OMG!!!! I couldn't stop laughing as I was reading this.My neighbors complained because I was reading it at 3 o'clock in the morning.My computer has soda on it because of random spit takes. But it was worth it. It's good to know that someone out there has more of a twisted imagination than I do. For some strange reason I kept picturing Yuki's dick wearing gold chains, a wife beater and baggy pants; and everytime it spoke it had hip hop with a heavy base playing in the back ground (but maybe that was just me....) Now I definitely have to read "Hiro Breaks it Down!" Keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Kurama\'s Dream Girl on September 08, 2005
    Wow! Your writing is so great! When I was done reading it, all I could do was sit in shock and stare as my eyes glazed over! There were so many terrific parts, I can't even really pick my favorite out of them....but I must say this: I am no longer a strict Yuki/Shuichi fan. Yes, now I'm in love with Yuki/Shuichi AND Tetsuha/Ryuichi! I love them both! Although, K IS married...*ahem*...anyway...lol! I can tell you really would like to make your own anime/manga, right? I got that impression from the ending, which was so descriptive, just like the rest of the story! I loved the "Naked Friend Fridays" part! LoL! However, I just hope the two brothers STAY with their respective partners and don't waver while in/during NFF's, lol! This is absolutely the best fanfiction I've read on Gravitation! Thanks so much for writing this for all of us fangirls out here! *raises glass* And here's hoping you'll write more Gravitation Fanfiction to come! Bring on the comedy! Bring on the romance! Bring on the Naked Twister! lol! I can't wait! Long live the Gravitaion Era and the neverending romances of Yuki and Shuichi & Tetsuha and Ryuichi! Long live Yaoi!

    *Kurama looks at insane girl* "Um...I think you've scared everyone away..."
    *Evil laughter* "Well, good for US then, right? Fanfics make me think WRONG things...he he he he..."
    *Gulp* *Teardrop*
    *Here Kitsune, Kitsune...*

    WRITE MORE FANFICTION! WE LOVE YOU!

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  • From on September 01, 2005
    This was awesome on SO many levels. I love your style of writing! I got all the way through except for the last chapter, and aff.net wouldn't open it (that this page cannot be displayed page kept coming up)... I nearly cried. This was funny and wicked all at the same time. I love the thought of Naked Friend Fridays. Now if only they would consent to putting those in the anime and manga, we would be all set!
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on August 24, 2005
    My gawd but this was a fun ride! I read this at work and burst out into gales of laughter complete with snorting and tears in my eyes. It's a good thing they already think I'm strange or this woulda clinched it. This was an absolute hoot. Wonderful pacing and I loved the "conversations" between the boys and their equipment. I've still got a smile on my face. Thank you.
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  • From Ayeshagirl on August 15, 2005
    lol i laughed sooo hard about the 'rest in peas' bit.....
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  • From Ayeshagirl on August 15, 2005
    I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on July 30, 2005
    This story was awsom I havent stoped lagfing yet and im gonna make my older brother read it because I have to ^.^
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  • From ANON - Morri on July 27, 2005
    Tatsuha had no idea his dick could sing bass.

    I haven't laughed this hard in forever, thank you! This is great and hot and funny as hell and it's going straight into my list of favorite stories!
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  • From ANON - Nakazaki on July 23, 2005
    @_____@ this is such a goooood fic~!!! Plz plz update!! I cant wait 2 read ur next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on July 19, 2005
    I haven't read a gravitation fic in ages, but I deced to tonight, and I picked this one and I'm so glad I did. It made me laugh, and was very very deliciously hot. Nice job. I like the idea of naked games. hehehe Anyway, great job. keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Fallen_Angel_Of_Darkness on July 17, 2005
    LMAO I loved that!!! Suichi's pillow talk takes me breath away!!
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  • From ANON - Saitaina on July 09, 2005
    We need more Naked Friend Fridays. *nod, nod*

    Great story, darling.
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