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Reviews for The Bet

By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - appypie4000 on July 05, 2005
    That was the funniest fic i had eva read!! OMG, that was so freakin funny. thanks for making me laugh out loud, its been a while. Man, Yuki and his bro has some serious probs LoL. I love this story, this is one of my faves. :) Favorite scenes..hmmm alot. I can't stop laughin though...its just a great fic
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on July 05, 2005
    i laugh my pants oof! 'sooo funny i loved the talking dicks!
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on June 25, 2005
    very nice! i really enjoyed it...the interactions between characters were GREAT!!!
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  • From ANON - XforgotenXfaceX on June 15, 2005
    This is in the top 5 of fanfics i've read (and i've read hundreds of fanfics)!!!! my sister told me to read this fic and i loved it so much. i really like how you gave the 2 couples diferent "styles". in most fics with more than one couple they do the exact same things in the exact same order.... and your fic was so funny too! my friends and i talk about the "naked lap-dance thursday" and "naked free-for-all friday" lol now i've started reading "hiro breaks it down" because i liked this one so much...
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  • From ANON - elf on June 13, 2005
    I do believe this is the single best story I have read on this entire site... and believe me, I've read a lot.

    Wow... just wow...

    I haven't laughed so hard in a long time, and the over all effect of plot, character, etc. etc. is all fantastic, really making this an enjoyable read.
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  • From ANON - Hell\'s Angel on June 12, 2005
    great story hope you write more
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  • From ANON - Crystal56 (who is a little too lazy in logging in things...something like that) on June 12, 2005
    WOW! That was like...the funniest thing!
    I love it!
    That was so fricken hilarious!
    I mean it...dear me ROFLMAO
    I don't think there's anything funnier
    The whole ego vs. dick conversations was great!
    I loved it so fricken much!
    You're such a great writer!
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  • From ANON - kuroi-sakurapetals on June 10, 2005
    This is the best freaking gravitation fic i've ever read in my entire life!! I almost choked to death from laughing so freaking hard man. Really "His ego might be british but his dick was straight out of Compton" man i was laughing so hard for that one for a good two minutes!! My dogs were all looking at me like if i was crazy!! Where, just where did you come up with this ridiculusly funny stuff? Oh my gosh i'm still laughing as i write this review. You have certainly made my day and i'm saving this story somewhere so when i'm down, i'll get a laugh out of this and feel happy again. Right now at the moment, i have upper throat infection from having the cold so i really almost choked to death from laughing so hard. At least if i'd had gone down, i would have gone down with a smile upon my face. God so many things i loved about this story. From Yuki and Tatsuha's ego and dicks coming to life and crying or playing the harmonica to the Naked days that Ryu-chan and Tatsuha had for the various days of the week. Crotchless pants, lace pants, Yuki's and Tatsuha's dicks ablities to sing(singing some classics too), sparkles, tons of cheese, K's super hearing, i loved it all. Great work!! Love ya to pieces, Wish their were other great stories like this for me to read all day long. You get a perfect ten out ten from me!!
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  • From ANON - Meisa on June 07, 2005
    I really like your story and to be honest I have never laughed this hard while reading a fanfic before until now. So thank you for that and I hope you keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - mistress_of_hyde on June 06, 2005
    this is the best smut fic ever! well done :D i really couldn't stop laughing ...i'm expecting another fic from you *wink*
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  • From ANON - Asrella on June 06, 2005
    Hello.

    I'm glad everyone is enjoying it. I honestly didn't think so many people would read it, let alone like it. To answer a few questions: No, Yuki's dick is still very much Japanese. Tired and probably in a sling by now, but still from Japan. The "Compton" thing was meant to convey attitude not color. A contrast for his British ego. I honestly don't know why I thought of his ego sounding like Alfred from Batman so that's why the story literally says "for some reason his dick spoke with a clipped British accent." Who knows why I think the things I do? Anon--funny you should mention that particular three way as I've been thinking along those lines myself...I'm still new to fanfic, so don't know right off where you could find that story if it isn't here someplace. If I find one, I'll let you know. Thanks for the kind words everyone.
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  • From ANON - V on June 06, 2005
    ROTFLOL! That was so much fun! Although, K could have sent the cheese to orphanages across the globe. Not that I'm suggesting the world should be filled with cheese stuffed orphans or anything. I really liked this story and hope you write more like this!
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  • From ANON - Mzblue on June 06, 2005
    Man words can not express the utter joy reading this fic was. I have literally laughed my ass off. Plus it was filled with good wholesome smutty fun!!!!! My god the descriptions alone were worth cackling wildly and cheering my fave men on. Yeah Yuki, Yeah Tatsuha!!!! WHO'S YOUR DADDY!!! I truly wish to thank you for writing such an amusing fic. Yeah there might have been some ooc, (just a little) but you captured the true Horny essence that is the Uesugi brothers. Plus who else can top singing dicks!!!!!!! LOL. Great work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2005
    i truely enjoy readin ur ficts i was wonderin if u have a hero,eri,n shu threesome fict out or if u know were i can find one??? please???
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  • From ANON - Renaline on June 06, 2005
    again, it was really funny. AFF doesnt get much adult XXX comedy. so im happy you are alive and authoring.

    but seriosuly... im not being racist.. does Eiri have a resident compton black man's dick?
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