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By : Rhonda
  • From Udyjay on February 03, 2007
    You completely made my day with this. XD I dunno why, but I feel like reviewing again. You are just so fucking awesome. XD Thought I had to let you know that. You portrayed the characters so fucking hilariously, I died.

    This part: Getting the pants undone, he bucked his lap harder, allowing Ryuichi to bounce his way further and further out of his pants. Ryuichi laughed with delight (a sound that made Tatsuha smile through his sweat) then, free of his pants, went to work on his underwear.


    I found that.. one of the cutest things in my LIFE. I litterally went "...Aaawwhh! How fucking sexy!" and my sister was all "The fuck?". XD Had to let you know, I thought that was fucking cute. ... ... Yeah.



    Marry me?
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  • From Udyjay on February 03, 2007
    Oh jesus christ help me, WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING AWESOME?! XD The whole.. dick things, with them smoking and.. stuff, man, I was listening to music, right? And when I read that, I paused the music to CRACK THE FUCK UP. I paused it, turned my spinny chair and laughed, falling off and my dog jumped on me thinking I wanted to play. I DIED.


    Otherwise, that wassoeffinghot. Like wowowowowowow. Kyayayayayaksdamdkajldkjf. I don't have any words for that. Is there another word for hot? HOOOOOOOT. LIKE. HHOOOOOOOOOOTTTttttt......aaaaahhdfasdjk. Mm. I.. I forgot what I was going to say. All I know that it was a praise for you, because you are my new God. XD I truly love you, you know that?
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  • From Udyjay on February 03, 2007
    *dies* .. ... ... ...





    That, my dear, was so. Incredibly hot, I was like. Whoa. Uh. Kay. I have nothing to say, besides the fact that I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AGRAHRAGHRHAGRHAGRHG.
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  • From Udyjay on February 02, 2007
    Oh. My. GOD. I. DIED. SOOOOO MUCH reading this, you would never understand. I fucking love it. XD I LOVE IT. It's so fucking HILARIOUS how you make their dicks talk man, that's so priceless. XDDDDD Holy.. fucking crap. I want to sleep sooo bad, my back hurts, but I can't. I HAVE to keep reading. XD Man oh man, this is.. sooooo awesome. Poor Shuichi! Poor Ryu! They just want some lovin'!
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  • From ANON - Anansay on November 24, 2006
    That was the best story I've read in a long time. It immediately grabbed me with the quick action and the dialogue--I LOVED the dialogue: quick and witty and so very charming. You've got Yuki caustic wit down pat. :P And Ryu's little child bit, and then the adult bit. And Shuuichi's cute whining. It was the whole 'cheese' thing that had tears pouring down my face, I had to stop more than few times to wipe the tears off my face and continue reading. It was hilarious.

    I've only just gotten in Gravitation, only see the eps and OAVs and read NONE of the manga so i don't know what's canon and what's your creation, but the whole thing merged so well. I really enjoyed this. :D
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  • From ANON - teodora on October 21, 2006
    this is really THE BEST!!!!!! i laughed my ass off. god those jokes were killers! and the sex scenes,, woohoo!! :D really great. congrats!
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  • From ANON - Tyson on July 25, 2006
    OMG This has got to be the best story I have ever read! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!
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  • From ANON - SoumaNina-san on February 13, 2006
    Wow....wow.....wow.....I've never had to laugh so loud in my life...........This is a good one....you've potray everyone's character the way i dream they would be....One of the best i've read so far....I can't believe the whole group is still bumping uglys in my mind....Well ...Guess ...i won't be able to sleep tonight......Job well done......

    Regards,
    SoumaNina
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on February 01, 2006
    This is the funniest fic I have every every every read. I loved it so much it wasGREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love this, and i laughed my ass off totallyand completely. Thank You so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - ralphiere on January 27, 2006
    *tries to breath, wiping away the tears* I haven't laughed that much reading ANYTHING in a LONG time. You have totally captured the purpose behind Gravitation - the humor. You've writen something that rivals some of Murakami's most bizarre situations, and pulled it off without a hitch! Between the musical talent of genetalia and the amazing dialogue you had me in stitches. A brilliant job!

    I loved the end credits - again brilliant!

    ~Su
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  • From ANON - PIKACHU GODDESS on January 11, 2006
    That...was the FUNNIEST Gravitation fic I have read in a long time! The part when Yuki was typing and Shuichi was licking the lollipop...priceless! And the parts when Yuki's dick and ego were battling...HAHAHAHAH!!! I expecially LOVE the end credits!!! Are you on gurabiteshion.net? If not, yu should be! This fic, and any other Gravitation ones you write should be there, as other Gravitation fans should have the pleasure of reading your hilarious writings!

    Hope to see you there, and KEEP WRITING, ONEGAI!!!

    EIRI-CHICK
    (-_-)=~
    aka
    PIKACHU GODDESS
    (o';'o)
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  • From ANON - angelofdeath47 on December 29, 2005
    OMFG, that was so fucking hilarious!!!!! Through the entire thing, I was almost peeing my pants. I felt so sorry for them. You actually feel that ache that they must've felt. To pass up such good catch.
    "Oops... I think I broke him." He's so adorable! I love Ryuichi! He's so cute, I just get all wound up when I see him. I'm a sucker for cute things. All my defenses go down when I see or hear the cutest thing. His lines have got to be the best, just so adorable and innocent, it's got to be a crime. Tatsuha's just a very big kid, and they make the perfect match.
    Well, that was a very entertaining and amazing story. Certainly had me laughing through the entire length of it. I'll be looking to see if you write anything else.
    - S.B.

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  • From ANON - Hillary (Oakie) on November 22, 2005
    Sorry, me again. I have to know. What is by the can opener?
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Oakie) on November 22, 2005
    I cannot tell you how much I love this story, and Hiro Breaks it Down, and the Rules of Engagement! You are by far my favorite shounen-ai/yaoi author ever!! Keep up the incredible work!! I hope to see a rather lengthy and detailed story about K and Hiro!! And don't you dare worry about long chapters!! I want something to READ not just skim through. Details are key, and yours are wonderful. Have a great Thanksgiving, if you celebrate it that is. KEEP WRITING!!! Feel free to drop me a line. :)
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  • From ANON - Danjana on November 14, 2005
    OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is sooooo freakin' hilarious!!! Tatsuha had me in hysterics laughing while I was reading chapter two. I HAVE to make sure that I read everything you've written, this is one of the funniest stories I've read in a long time.

    KUDOS!!!!
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