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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Iron Dog on December 17, 2005
    I'm glad you like what I'm doing here with m'boys. With regards to the use of food...I did put a note at the end of the fic. Food play must be done carefully and you should use a few brain cells when deciding what you want to put where. Although the use of the candy does work, it isn't something I'm encouraging people to do. As with all the things I've written in this Serial, you should use common sense when engaging in any of the play I've described.

    Remember that this is a work of fiction. I may have tried out this stuff just to see if it does work, but that doesn't mean you should too. Play safe people.
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  • From ANON - Tagath on December 17, 2005
    Your serial is really, really good. This one isn't my favourite, because I don't really like the idea of using food during sex, but i've already read it twice because I like how you writte. It's easy to understand, detailed and pleasant to read!^__^
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on December 17, 2005
    OH.........MY!!!!
    These little interludes keep getting hotter and hotter!
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  • From ANON - jarm on December 17, 2005
    love this spanking story, BTW, be very careful what goes where, I work in the hospital and so many times had to assist is the removal of rectal foreign objects(food or other very strange items) It is not a good experience for the patient as it is painful and humiliating for them.
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  • From ANON - c on December 15, 2005
    *faint* Oh, that was lovely. You just made my day. *____*
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  • From ANON - K-chan on December 14, 2005
    *head-desk*

    This was...amazing. It's SO good to see some well written smut and this was just nothing short of mind-blowing. Amazing fic!
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on December 14, 2005
    *jaw drops, candy falls out* Wow, I don't read too much of food play. That was well written and yummy. :D
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  • From ANON - mzblue on December 14, 2005
    Man, I just love your stories, erotic fics that pack such a hot kinky punch to the mental stablility. Saiyuki goodness that is well written is a treasure, can't wait to see what you do with the boys. Now remember , hehhe, I'll let ya borrow the priest for a while but I get him back when you're done. LOL!!!
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  • From ANON - Julie E. on December 13, 2005
    I'm just addicted to this series. Thanks for another great one to read. I have to admit that it was your writing (among one or two others) that got me into this pairing, and I'm just Sanzo-Gojyo crazy right now. Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - jarm on December 13, 2005
    just love spanking!!!!!!11
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  • From AnDesha on December 13, 2005
    i REALLY LOVE THIS SERIES! It's well done both in the sense os the writing and the characterization (especially for Sanzo). You seem very professional and knowedgable (sp?). I've been following this series since the beginning and it always makes my day to find an update. Keep at it!
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  • From ANON - Daxzia on December 13, 2005
    Great, wonderful. As always. didn't even wait to get home to read that. You are wonderful in this department. please take your time writing the next one, we'll all be waiting....
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  • From ANON - Cory on November 24, 2005
    Oh, man, that was freaking HOT!!

    You are such a great author... I love this ENTIRE series...

    My favorite line: **Great. Now I sounded like a junkie. A Sanzo cock junkie.**

    And what's wrong with being a Sanzo cock junkie?? LOL I also like the idea of seeing this from Sanzo's point of view... but it is great just like this too.

    Keep up the good work.

    ~Cory
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  • From ANON - jarm on November 18, 2005
    oh please finish this with an over the knee spanking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Julie E. on November 15, 2005
    Well, what's not to love in #7?
    I have to say that my fave little detail in this fic is Sanzo's nipple jewlery. :P
    That sounds so hot, I have to say (all the while telling herself that the Sanzo-ikkou are not real and that she really needs to get a life) and I have greatly enjoyed this series. Great work!
    Julie
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