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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Jamie on November 14, 2005
    *Purrs* Woooonderful, as always... *Slides off to read it again*

    Sanzo certainly does enjoy tying Gojyo up and spanking him, heh. But nobody is complainig about THAT, lol! Totally worth the wait, Iron Dog, great job!
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  • From ANON - vampunk on November 14, 2005
    God, that was so unbelievably hot. Your descriptions are amazing. You have real talent. I hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - daxzia on November 14, 2005
    thank you, thank you , thank you. wonderful. man it was great. need a smoke.

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  • From ANON - faradheia on November 14, 2005
    laksdbueiwuhrhslkdfnlka..................

    I think I'm melted..... Damn that was hot!!!! What are the possibliities of getting a 7a from Sanzo's POV?????

    Wow!!! Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
    Whoa, that was great. I can't wait for the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - daxzia on November 14, 2005
    you know i haven't even read it yet. and i am going to review it. damn this story is good. it's great. i freaking love you man. these stories are by far the reason i come to this sight other than the "My Sun, My Supernova." story. i can tell when i get off work and read the story i am going to be loving it and waiting, urning for the next one. please, PLEASE don't stop writing these stories. they are wonderful. i fuckin can't wait!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blizzard on November 07, 2005
    I love this series! And I especially love the way you've made Sanzo and Gojyo's relationship work. None of them is completely uke or seme, it all depends on the time and place, so to speak. I have no idea who of them I like better as "uke" but I worship your stories no matter who's on top! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter (for there will be one, won't there? Please?) and hoping for a return of "antenna abuse" from Sanzo's side (I wish I'd come up with that, _so_ hot).
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    The thought of such instruments terrify me. I did burst out laughing at some of the mental images though. Bet Sanzo ain't so tight anymore.

    You're still a master of erotic fanfiction though. If I printed out your stories and handed them to my gay friends, you can bet that the pages will all end up stuck together.

    Hope you'll write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    A bit fantastical... but I guess more poetic? *LOL* Sure beats just placing them both in a jacuzzi though... no matter how much I love jacuzzis ^_^

    Are they falling in love?
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    I think girls get the same kick out of watching two men suck each other off as guys do with watching lesbians.

    And who needs girls in this series when Sanzo can double up as a pretty one. Ohh... that robe...

    You know that I won't be able to watch Saiyuki with the same innocent viewpoint again. You rock!
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    THIS is definitely my favorite one (for Saiyuki)! More tame than the others, but more erotic. I don't know how you managed to strike a balance between some steaming session and some sweet gentle lovin' for Gojyo and Sanzo, but you succeeded! If you send your manuscript to a Saiyuki doujinshi artist and get this story illustrated... whoa!!!

    You know how much we'll pay to see Gojyo and Sanzo get it on!
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    A bit too much smut for me, so I skipped most of the bondage bits (a conventional demon exists too >.< ). But I just wanted to leave a review to say that your style of writing rocks anyway ^_^
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  • From ANON - chaoticcleric on November 06, 2005
    Now I know why this fanfic series was recommended! Wow! I'm sitting here fanning myself at the fantasy of the hottest yaoi couple ever. You were very loyal to the personality traits of the characters. The first person narrative actually worked very well too - big thumbs up for that!

    I've always wanted to read about a HOT gun-kink session between the bastard monk and his 'favorite' companion. Now I want a gun, for all the wrong reasons... or should I say right? ^_^
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  • From ANON - cranberry on November 03, 2005
    Nnngghhh - HOT! (I think Gojyo's "antennae" are just cowlicks, you know? But I think you've come up with a much yummier explanation ;)) Write more soon :) :).
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on November 03, 2005
    Viva la perv! I love the antani ( dont spell for shit) and you should write a book one Sex 101. You have taught me so much!

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