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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From nimblnymph on May 22, 2007
    You don't have enough reviews for this piece of brilliance. Normally, I would never, never, NEVER go for a SanzoxGojyo pairing. It just doesn't sit well with me. But you... damn you. You've converted me. (shoves Hakkai away from Sanzo) I really don't think another writer has been able to do this as perfectly as you have. They are so incredibly IC, even with the pushing of their emotional boundaries.

    Plus... damn, is this some hot smut! I am so turned on right now it's ridiculous. Thanks for sharing your genius with everyone here. I'm curious when the next HakuryuuxHakkai one's gonna come out. And what's with the magpie? I have my theories about that... but I'll wait to see what your fabulous genius has in store. Thanks again!~
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  • From KansouAme on May 03, 2007
    Yeah!!! You updated!! I absolutely fucking love this story. IronDog you ROCK! So Sanzo knows huh? and he didn't freak... This just keeps getting better and better! Thanks again!
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  • From Dragon7 on May 03, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you finally posted a new chapter. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


    P.S. Goyjo and Sanzo are so kawaii... together.
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  • From Chizuko313 on April 22, 2007
    Yeah definately hail Gojyo cause he rocks! XD! Very Hot water sex scene. I love how every chapter has had sex in it so far. You make me soooooooooo happy thanks,
    ~Chizuko
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  • From Chizuko313 on April 22, 2007
    Yay! Gojyo's so sauve and sexy! Given in to the charm Sanzo give in! Gojyo won't stear you wrong. He knows all there is to it to get you off. Hurray for Kappas! Great sex scene again. i don't know how you do it but congradulations for being such an amazing writter!
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  • From Chizuko313 on April 22, 2007
    *squeels* Sanzo enjoyed it alright. I love a "cocky" Gojyo if you know what I mean. Another great sex scene. Your writting is flawless! I love this series cause it is the longest Gojyo Sanzo fic with plenty of sex that is written with such excellent talent! Arigatou!
    ~Chizuko
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  • From Chizuko313 on April 22, 2007
    XD! I love how the characters are so similar to the series yet fit so well as a couple. You do very well at keeping things believable. I could so see Sanzo getting Gojyo tied up in the scrolls and Gojyo enjoying beeing spanked. I swear you write this so well that i can imagine the character's speaking those lines in my head. Love your story i've read it more than a few times for each chapter.
    ~Chizuko
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  • From Chizuko313 on April 22, 2007
    Very kinky! I love this story. If it weren't for the fact i love that it goes on it could even stand alone as a one shot. Gojyo ans Sanzo are my favorite Saiyuki parring and i can't get enough of them angsting and roughing each other up for sex! Thanks so much for the yummy read *bows head*
    ~Chizuko
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  • From feidragon on April 19, 2007
    please please PLEASE write some more of this!!! I've been waiting for you to update for awhile and I finally broke down and created a new account (forgot my old on) just so I could harass you. I really do love this story, I started reading it right after you posted gun play. I want more hakkai/hakuryu ^^ they're just way too adorable!
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  • From vbruce on April 02, 2007
    Will you PLEASE continue this?! Soon.
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  • From CryptJo on March 07, 2007
    Aaah, I loved everything about this story. GojyoxSanzo (or indeed, SanzoxGojyo) is my pairing of choice and it's great to read such a fantastically well written fic about them! I also really enjoyed the side-story with Hakkai.

    An excellent piece of writing and definitely one of my all-time favourite fanfics, Saiyuki or otherwise.
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  • From cupnjava on February 17, 2007
    Aww, this chapter turned out as sweet as you said you wanted it too. XD Great job!
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  • From Ginny on February 13, 2007
    Awww that's so cute... I'm starting to get an idea of who the magpie could be and why it's there, but I'm still seriously curious... Little Goku is so sweet *cuddles him* And always being left out of the 'adult' stuff:P Well not always be you get the point...
    Gods how I love this series!
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  • From KansouAme on February 11, 2007
    This is one of my all time favorite stories! Thank you so much for keeping it going. I love your work!
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on February 06, 2007
    i am loving this! usually, i can't stand this pairing, but since it was your fic, i gave it a chance. i'm very glad that i did! i eagerly await the next installment.
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