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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch

From ANON - ariesgirl on November 12, 2006
Yay! im so glad you updated! and two chapters so soon together too
theyre both amazing ^^
Hakkai s so smart, im really happy that he�s figuring it all out,
and Sanzo and Gojyo are doing really well too
im a total sucker for happy endings
Please update soon

p.s. i LOVE you!!!!

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From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on November 11, 2006
YAY!
that was by far one of the best chapters so far!
i dont know why....but for some reason i love it when sanzos sick and gojyo is the one to care for him!
i have to say....this story is extremely well written....and i enjoy reading each and every word!
i cant wait to read more!
hope youll update soon! ^.^
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From ANON - ReiZero on November 10, 2006
This amde me so happy I almost cried!!! I'm really starting to love this pairing.
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From ANON - gretel_chan on November 06, 2006
Beautiful chapter. I'm enjoying the storyline with Hakkai and Hakryuu. The really lovely thing is how you weave in very striking parts of the other characters while focusing on the main pairing. I love Goku and Gojyo's interactions in the early parts of the chapter - seeing the "everyday" of the characters adds so much depth.
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From ANON - Cupnjava on November 06, 2006
This is awesome! I LOVE this pairing and you work them so beautifully. I had a wonderful snicker at this point.

�Quite frankly, I was terrified that something happened to you. I looked for you, you know. I�ve rarely felt that afraid. Please don�t do that again, Hakuryuu.�

In my mind I saw Hakkai lifting his index finger. "Remember, Hakuryuu, the last time my lover went missing over 1,000 people died. Let's not repeat that, shall we?" Insert sickening sweet Hakkai smile here followed by Hakuryuu feeling the urge to count the population of the town.

BIG HUGS AND KISSES TO YOU! Another wonderful installment! Yes, indeed. SQUEEEEE!!!
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From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on November 05, 2006
YAY!!!!
another AMAZING chapter!
im so in love with this story!...(i say that every time i god damn review.....^.^)
..o well...still mean it with all my heart, soul, mind, and everything else that i have....^.^
once again i cant wait for the next chapter....i die waiting to read more of this story every time ^.^
i hope you update soon! ^.^
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From ANON - jarm on November 05, 2006
Sooooooooo glad you are back with this one. Hope all is well on your end.
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From ANON - nimblnymph on November 04, 2006
I have been waiting for an update on this for what seems like forever. The only thing I can say constructively is that you're brilliant, and this is beautifully sexy. I do feel bad that Goku's not getting any fun, but this is perfect on it's own. Thank you.
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From ANON - ariesgirl... again on October 09, 2006
right so i was rereading this for the millionth time
and i randomly thought of something
what if Hakkai randomly decided to take a bath and Hakuryuu randomly snuck in
i donno
you dont have to put it in there or anything cuz you probly already have a set story line right?
but if you feel like it, that would be awesome

please update soon
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From ANON - draelynn on October 05, 2006
Killing... me... with each and every chapter. All the little innovative touches to each and every character. Sentimental Gojyo. Fierce yet highly damaged Sanzo. Protective Hakkai. And not-so-dumb Goku. Yep. My head's gonna explode. *glomps pitifully like a fangirl* Thankyouthnakyouthankyou....
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From ANON - E.T. on September 26, 2006
Oh my gods. This is the best Saiyuki fic series EVER! It is always beautifully written and I can't get enough of Gojyo x Sanzo goodness. You are my favourite author on AFF. I CANNOT wait for more! Please kep up your brilliant work.
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From ANON - jarm on September 24, 2006
wonderful as always!!
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From ANON - ariesgirl on September 23, 2006
awww
that was so cute
in a kinky hot sexy kinda way
i ve probly mentioned this before but i love how in character they are, i could completely picture this happening. XD
thank you for updating
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From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on September 23, 2006
as always....its ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
im still so in LOVE with your story!
i cant wait to read more!
im extremely glad that sanzo and gojyo are not calling it quits....that would have made me terribly sad if they did!....^.^
i have to say...you are by far one of the best writers of fanfiction....i love your work!
please hurry and update so that i have more smut to read! ^.^
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From ANON - Dragon on September 23, 2006
Love this story love the love this chapter Sanzo and Gojyo together and I really senses love the sex I just love every thing this story so keep on writing and update soon
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