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Reviews for Saiyuki Serial:Beautifully Broken Evolution

By : greywitch
  • From ANON - Ta Boo on September 17, 2006
    Oooohhhh! This is an interesting chapter. I'm usually not a fan of this pairing since people tend to write them so OOC (plus I'm a Gojyo/Sanzo fangirl) but you wrote this really well and it was great! Keep up with the fab story. I can't wait for an update.
    (More Gojyo/Sanzo please ^^)
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  • From ANON - daisey on August 31, 2006
    god, I LOVE the twist you've given this. This is still my favorite Saiyuki series of all time, and you truly are a talented author. Thank you so much for continuing this wonderful series!
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  • From ANON - jarm on August 31, 2006
    That was warm, touching and beautiful! I could almost see them under that tree. Your stories just keep getting better.
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  • From ANON - ReiZero on August 29, 2006
    Weeeeee!!! I really love Hakkai/Hakuryu now!!! It's so god damn hot! *drools* Really loved this chapter!!! Teehee! Alley sex is hot!!! Up-date soon!
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  • From ANON - Ariesgirl on August 29, 2006
    that was really really sweet
    XD
    i love how you write, you get the characters down perfectly
    aaand now im addicted. so you gotta write more please!
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on August 29, 2006
    Oh man. Now I don't know who I love more, Hakkai and Hakuryuu, Gojyo and Sanzo, Zesiro and Raoul, or Mingan and Sevilan. AHHHHH >
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  • From ANON - bluesnake40 on August 28, 2006
    Yah, another chapt ... I am really enjoying your pairing of Hakuryuu/Hakkai and the development of their relationship. You've managed to give the dragon such human characteristics and liked how you've handled his transformation into a human yet with his dragon characteristics. Can't wait to see how things develop and what's going to happen on the Sanzo/Gyojo front. May this fic continue with many, many chapts still to come!
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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on August 28, 2006
    wow...that was sooooooo fucking HOT!!!
    i love your story soooooooooooo much! ^.^
    i cant wait to read more!...especially more gojyoxsanzo!
    please hurry and update!
    im DYING to know what happens next between both hakkai and hakuryu and gojyo and sanzo! ^.^
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on August 28, 2006
    I'm so glad you posted more of this pairing. Well done as always, and I really grinned at Hakkai's parting shot to Gojyo.
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  • From ANON - Chizuko on August 26, 2006
    Very beautiful as usual. please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Basthet on August 25, 2006
    I like this chapter a lot. It's so very cute.
    I always ask myself what Dragon would sound like.

    Did you make up that whole story about Hakuryu's past or have you read somewhere that he was someone else in heaven too?
    I ask that because some of my friends and I, had wondered how Hakkai had got Hakuryu, even some time before we've read this chapter.

    I totally love this fanfiction. Uo to now I've read so many fanfictions in English and German and for me this one is is defenitely one of the best. And it's the best Saiyuki-fic I ever read.

    By the way, I like the way how you describe Hakkais and the effect he has on others. He always seems to be a bit threatening. That's really good. I believe he really is like that. And I believe it even more since I've seen him as a full Youkai without his controlers on. (you can see him and his abilities in part 7 of Saiyuki Reload, when he fights an outraged Goku)
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on August 24, 2006
    Sigh. So sweet. And the past lives with Hakuryuu and Hakkai was really good too. =) Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - chizuko on August 24, 2006
    I've been following this fic for a while and I love it too death. It's so hot, s passionate. And This chapter I have to say is the coolest and most uniquie idea I have ever read. I love sanzo and Gojyo. But incoperating Hakkaryu as a reincarnate of heaven is the coolest. It is true from the legend that the dragon god accompanied Sanzo's group and could take human form as well as a horse. With Kazuya minekura's jeep version though Hakkaryu's story isn't mentioned. I love your Idea and this fic is not only the hotest smut ut a beautiful story. I very much like your works. Thanks so much for this chapter and please continue updating. I got to go review the next chapter (i've been away so I have to catch up on reading all the chapters)~~An adoring fan
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  • From ANON - Crimson on August 24, 2006
    What a facinating idea. I really liked this. I despise Gojyo and Sanzo, but I can set that aside for the marvelously unique idea that centered this fic. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - Basthet on August 23, 2006
    I simply love your style of writing.
    You've got such a great kind of expressing the feelings of the characters. I'm very impressed by the fact that you always seem to know how the Saiyuki-guys would think and act. For me they are never out of character and I think, that's something only a few writers manage to accomplish.
    Please go on like that. I want to know, if Sanzo and Gojyo could actually have a real relationship and by the way I want to hear more about Hakkai and Hakuryu...

    P.S.: Sorry, if my English sucks, but I'm from Germany.
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