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Reviews for Train Wreck

By : willar19
  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on August 24, 2006
    I just love it when people make condescending statements like they know so much more than you, when they're showing that they obviously know nothing. Just ignore Aelan. He/she obviously didn't pay attention at all. First of all, about Eiri being OOC. This is a pretty dramatic situation, how many people do you know would hold on to a stiff, cold facade in a life or death situation? It's absurd her trying to say anything about that. Second, Eiri has been called both Yuki and Eiri. At times Uesugi was used too, so that's just dumb. Three, Yuki has be distant and cold at times, but he's also been sweet and caring. Like you said, some people really need to go back and as is said in Naruto, look "underneath the underneath." There are some people who just don't understand the concept of mental trauma and people acting a certain way to protect themselves from getting hurt, but that way that they act not being the way they truly are. Yuki is NOT as cold and unfeeling as he acts and he DOES love Shuichi, it's clear to see if you pay attention. Whatever, some people are just think they're smarter than they are and that they know more than everybody else. They just need to be ignored and completely disregarded. Your doing fine with your characterizations within the story so don't question yourself (in case you were) over some fool.

    And now on to your the story, this chapter is making me think of what happened on Prison Break this week, where the woman called what she thought was the police and the call got routed to the bad guys and she ended up being killed. Interesting. Anyways I liked this new chapter, though it makes me worried for the next with that cliffie. Hopefully nothing bad, or at least permanent, will be happening to either Shuichi or Eiri (you know I just noticed that I'm bouncing between calling him Eiri and Yuki). But maybe that stupid bitch of a doctor could have a little accident and fall out of the helicopter, that would be nice.
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  • From ANON - Eiri-san on July 23, 2006
    WOO! I liked that a lot! XD I never would have thought of an idea like that. Yup never would have! probably the train wreck but nothing else like what you did! Keep it coming!^^
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  • From ANON - Wolfie on July 16, 2006
    This is an awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next, and just what is ailing Eiri! ^_^
    Keep up the GREAT work! I think you are doing a wonderful job so far!
    Don't get to stressed out with work though! I wait patiently for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Aelan on July 12, 2006
    Um, just a hint. Eiri.. is waaaaaaaaaay out of character. And second note, he is known as Yuki. He took the name of the man when he killed him in New York. Third, Yuki is not that nice. He is distant, cold, and uncaring. He definately does not gently kiss Shuichi, he does not show obvious affection. He is not sweet and loving. Try watching the show, a hint.
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  • From ANON - chocho on June 28, 2006
    kul.
    at least now we know a little bit about that annoying bitch kyoko or whatever the hell her name is.
    hope you can get the next chapter out as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Chikky on June 25, 2006
    The chapter itself was good but it was too short. You could have taken it all the way up to getting back to the other train and left it off with a cliffhanger making your readers want more. But I enjoyed it~ And yay! I found the story again and now I'm happy XDD
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on June 10, 2006
    i like the story and yu are doing a good job on it and can not wait for more chapter of the story and see how every one is doing.
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  • From ANON - chocho on March 14, 2006
    Loooong time coming. And TWO for the price of one. Life is good. Excellent as always, but once again...I want to know what's up with Eiri!! Ahh!!
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  • From ANON - Chikky on January 20, 2006
    *tear*

    You're so discriptive, it really puts the situation into our heads. I really like that about your writing. Now excuse me while I go bawl.
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on January 20, 2006
    Eiri isn't dead. he can't be dead. I will be very mad if he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
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  • From ANON - chocho on January 19, 2006
    Loved it, of course. Cannot wait until the next chapter is out. You gotta tell us what happened to Eiri. Is he alright? Is he dead? TELL US!!!! Or else. Just remember this, I know where you live!!
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  • From ANON - the soul on January 18, 2006
    Got to say thank-you thank-you for posting a new chapter it is really good, I like the way the one train runs into the back of the other, bringing all of them together...Hope Shuichi finds Yuki...
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on January 18, 2006
    OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Eiri....please don't die....great job on this chapter
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  • From ANON - wictea on January 17, 2006
    hey!!!!! finish the story!!!!! i HATE cliffhangers like this!!!!!!!!!!!! geese woman, you really liike to make the hot bioys feel paiin don'y u? i like the part were the guy A... something or other trys 2 make conversation w/ Yuki. he never gave up. oh! i didn't really get how the girl was part of the plot though. maybe u could have made that clearer or something. please don't let Shuguru kill Hiroshi, but that whole seen w/ them is hilarious. alll in all i really like your writing still. u r defen. the suspenseful one arnt' u? well gatta go. mayb i'll review again. FINISH THE DAMN STORY WOMAN!! *eye twiches visibally* (don't take it the wrong way) >
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on December 28, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Not Eiri -cries- please update soon I have to know if he lives or not


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