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From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 30, 2005
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY MUGEN FALLS FOR FUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPINESS IS FOR ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCEPT ONE THING THAT KEEPS ME VERY VERY SAD... AND EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW THAT TOOK ALMOST FOREVER TO WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!...
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From ANON - Samurai_Champloo_Lover on June 30, 2005
Oh pleaseeeee!!!!!!!!! youre KILLING me, i need to have more NOW or else i will KILL myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon... REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Rio Grande on June 29, 2005
Well, I wanted them to end up together, so I guess I got what I wished for. Until Fuu regains consciousness, anyway. In all seriousness though, lovely chapter. Jin remained good and silent, only an image in Fuu and Mugen's minds. Mugen went appropriately mad, his reaction was really portrayed wonderfully and seemed utterly in character for him. The desecration of Fuu's image of Jin was really heart jerking and poignant as well. I wonder how it will change her outlook in the next chapter. I had no idea you were going to make this fic ten chapters long, by the way! Not that it couldn't be, it would just require more of an actiony plot, like with them doing more then fucking and feeling bad about being whores who fuck all the time. Or there could just be ten chapters of that. Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be great, because this fic is great and deserves the sequel you're going to make.
If you still desperately need a beta reader later, I could potentially volunteer, only I've never done it before and I'm going away for two weeks after July eighth and won't be able to get to a computer... clearly I'm not a prime candidate, but if it's for the sake of the story....
come out with the next chapter soon, and don't let the man get you down,
Rio
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From ANON - Winery on June 29, 2005
That was good

update
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From ANON - christal-chan on June 29, 2005
This is one of the best dam fic's i have ever read! I wonder is Fuu going to ever fall in love with Mugen? Anyways please please please update soon!
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From ANON - ChocolateHentai on June 29, 2005
Awww....man, that was so beautiful, deep type sh!t! That was poetry, hip-hop, etc. I dig Mugen and Fuu together anyway. Wow, like I'm working on my first S.C. fic but after reading yours, I'm shook....I may not post it...lol Keep up the good work:)
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From ANON - Inieda on June 28, 2005
Awesome characterization of Mugen and Fuu in this chapter as well. The parallels between Tatsuko and Mugen are very interesting. The only thing I might suggest is that you don't really need to put "flashback" and "end flashback" around your flashbacks because they're so short. I think that it would be sufficient to just leave them italicized. Of course, that is only my opinion, and that and about 65 cents will get you a candy bar from a vending machine. I apologize if that offends you. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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From ANON - rick on June 28, 2005
i'm talking about the 3rd chapter by the way
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From ANON - rick on June 28, 2005
why are the words cut off, i only read first chapter and it already got really annoying?
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From ANON - Rio Grande on June 27, 2005
You are an incredible writer, for starters. I love all of the songs you put in the beginning of this fic, and all of your fics, actually. I also really enjoyed the story behind Fuu's past, it was beautifully described and almost felt realistic, like I was reading some sort of an extension from Memoirs of a Geisha. (If you have not read this book, though I suspect you have, I highly recommend it.) Not to mention the way Jin's character is portrayed so far is really great - he's just this sort of untouchable character on the side line of Mugen and Fuu's crazy sex lives. I almost hope his part is never made any greater than that, although this might stem from the fact that I'm kind of a Mugen/Fuu supporter and I like all of the focus their relationship is getting right now. But I'm not going to hold my breath for that to pan out or anything, so far you haven't really shown yourself to be an author who enjoys fairy tale endings. You could tell me right now that the story finishes with Mugen marrying a prostitute and Fuu turning into a terribly disfigured paraplegic and I'd totally believe you. (Also, not that Fuu and Mugen getting together would be fairy tale like on any level.) I don't really have any critisiscms to make because you are a far superior writer to me so you'll just have to be satisfied with a glowing review about how much I adore this fic and hope you finish it, whatever wholly depressing direction it may (or may not!) take. pace, xoxo
Rio Grande
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From ANON - Samurai_Champloo_Lover on June 26, 2005
Oh my gosh!!!!!!! This is a very good story if I say so myself!... my friend, sesshy_lover... introduced me to this fic and I got hooked and addicted to it. I have read this story about 8 times and I would appreciate it if you updated another chapter! NO.... YOU BETTER UPDATE NOW OR ELSE I WILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... *cough cough...* Ummm... please excuse my harsh tone of voice and mild violence and language... ahem...
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From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 26, 2005
* LETS OUT BREATH...* OH MY FREAKIN GOD... THAT HAS GOT TO BE THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM A BIG MUGEN LOVER AND ALTHOUGH I LOVE JIN TOO... I LOVE MUGEN MORE BECAUSE UNDER ALL THAT THOUGH EXTERIOR, IS A SOFT SIDE WHOM REALLY CARES FOR FUU. LIKE THE ONE TIME WHEN FUU GOT KIDNAPPED, IT WAS MUGEN WHO CURSED AND WENT AFTER HER, NOT JIN... WHY DOES FUU HAVE TO LIKE JIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE ALLOW FUU TO FALL FOR MUGEN TOWARDS THE END PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL BE FOREVER INDEPTED (HOWEVER YOU SPELL IT) TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO WILL ALL OF MY FRIENDS WHOM I HAVE INTRODUCED THIS FANFIC TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... PLEASEEEE UPDATE SOON AND DONT MAKE ME DISAPOINTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ^___^
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From ANON - Kerrie on June 25, 2005
This chapter was so good. I love the way you write. Please update when you can!!
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From ANON - Wow on June 23, 2005
Damn. That was hot. And I actually felt bad for Mugen. Poor Mugen... Please continue!
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From ChocolateHentai on June 23, 2005
Yo...this is hot! I'm lovin' the way you have captured the atittudes of each character.
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