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Reviews for The Electra Complex

By : DeniPie
  • From ANON - babikakashi on November 27, 2005
    lolz....thanks for pointing me out...'the ones who don't review every chapter'...=D i've been waiting for this for a long time..thanks so much for finally...'pushing' it out...=P stupid puns...love the ending. =D and i CANNOT wait for the sequel...i'll review every chapter for that one, of course.

    no, i did not expect twins...but it's better this way. Mugen would feel all...macho, as you did put in the story..XDD can't wait for more SC stuff from u!
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  • From ANON - Shampoo on November 27, 2005
    Nothing but brilliance from start to finish with this story. One of the best SC stories ever written and a personal favorite of mine. You've made the characters more real than anything I've ever read before and I'm more of a Mugen/Fuu fan than ever because of it. I eagerly await anything you post next.
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  • From ANON - Rio Grande on November 27, 2005
    Wow, okay, so. I haven't reviewed this fic since you took that break due to your car accident (which I am so, so sorry about by the way. Cars are terrifying.) and, well, jeez. A lot's happened since then. I still am of the opinion that this is one of the best fanfics out there, not just in the SC section. You know just how to portray the characters - everything was perfect. And horrible, as well, which is sort of what the show is about. You're not afraid to go for those nasty descriptions and just really freak people out, which is wonderful because it helps one understand just how the character's can do what they do. And although you are able to show the nasty, ugly sides of the character's wonderfully, you also delve so deeply into their heads that you end up liking them anyway. I thought I would never like Mugen again after you made him kill that poor woman's husband - but, surprise, I did! He's really sort of endearing once you look past how out of touch he is with normal morals and decency, and you definitely made a point of showing that so that the reader could still experience your story without hating the characteres too much. His undying devotion to Fuu was cute, if not hard to understand at times in contrast with the rest of his personality, but of course it did all seem to make sense at the end when he felt like he finally had something to protect. The last line was really heartening, too. Sorta made me happy. Fuu and Jin's relationship was depressing but realistic - sometimes love works like that and it just sucks, although I have to say I ended up being more peeved that she still liked Jin so much when she was with Mugen now, rather than sorry that the two couldn't be together. You really made me a diehard Mugen/Fuu fan, interestingly enough... not that I wasn't to begin with. Also, the scene where Fuu has to watch her ex-lover get executed? That was done sooo well. I was totally squirming and feeling sick to my stomach. I don't know what you have in store for the sequel, I can't imagine a better story than this, but since you seem to have such high expectations for it I can't wait to read it. Thanks for a wonderful fic. Until next time, peace.
    rio grande.
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  • From ANON - CrIzEL on November 27, 2005
    Beautiful...Enticing, emotional, captivating, heart-felt. It's not the usual fairy tale ending where everything is all "happy." Very REALISTIC. I felt Fuu's emotions as well as the other characters...it made me CRY... I loved it!!! . Great job!!!! Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - moishoi on November 27, 2005
    'oly SHITE, can you write! no wonder this thing has the most reviews on this site!

    to tell the truth, i never really thought of any couples for this series, until i read this. i never thought Fuu 'n' Mugen'd be any good as a couple. but you put them together, as natural and loyal to their characters in the series as a fic CAN be!

    from the diction to how well the words FIT each character as their points of views were shared....you did it all with fireworks shooting up and lighting the skies in the background! it was PERFECT. never let anyone tell you otherwise!

    do you have a book out?! do you have a fucking book out?!?! i wanna be just like you when i grow up XD! and i await the mentioned sequel.
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  • From ANON - Chey-Chan on November 27, 2005
    Well this is the first comment I have made and the last as the story has ended. This is the most amazing Samurai Champloo story I have ever read. The charactors were simply wonder and the plot was great. I hope to see more from you in the future ^^.
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  • From ANON - Sam on November 27, 2005
    Nice.
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  • From ANON - alicia on November 25, 2005
    Alright, that's it! I love bittersweet endings! Perfect ending...just right!
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  • From ANON - Rienna on November 24, 2005
    Great story--I loved it. The ending was appropriate and flawless, but I can’t wait for the continuation. I was actually hoping the baby/ies would be female. I thought that would serve Mugen right; boys will just inflate his ego and make him even more difficult to deal with. Girls would throw him completely off-balance and make him doubt every philosophy he’s ever subscribed to. Boys will be a handful of hell for Fuu though. Thank you for this fic--it was the best I’ve ever read on this site, and even better, it was my favorite pairing to one of my favorite animes. I’ll be waiting impatiently for your next post.
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  • From ANON - Rowan on November 24, 2005
    What!? That CAN'T be the END!!! Aw, man! It was excellent, your story is the best I've read on here. But the END?? I was hoping I'd atleast get to see a wedding or something. I'm sad now, that's just really depressing. Can you write just one more chapter? Maybe about what their lives are like now after the kids are born, or maybe Mugen's plans with Fuu? You don't have to. I just think people would take the ending a bit easier if you did. Great work, though, I love it.
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  • From ANON - PinkRoseBouquet on November 24, 2005
    A satisfying ending to an action-packed story. I found your portrayals very true to character for all three: Jin the stoic warrior, Fuu the emotional, stumbling teen and Mugen the unbounded improvisor and pure fighter. The pairing of Mugen and Fuu was believable, although her extreme youth made it sometimes painful to read the abuse Mugen would subject her to at times.

    No, I didn't expect twins-- nice twist. Fuu will have her hands full with that pair.

    The scene with Jin at the end was so touching-- beautifully and perfectly written. Poor Fuu couldn't have the man she wanted, but the affection and respect remained on both sides at the end.

    I look forward to a continuation in the form of a sequel, if one is planned.

    Nice job. :-)
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  • From ANON - Mekou on November 24, 2005
    Awww, it makes me sad that it's now over. ;__; It's one of my most fav fics of all time! ^_________^
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  • From ANON - Biteswhenprovoked on November 23, 2005
    wow i love this story. that was a great ending.
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  • From ANON - Delia on November 23, 2005
    Haha, those people would be me.

    And I was half expecting Fuu to die at childbirth---
    pessimistic, yes--- But she died in 'Pedophilia Dreams'
    so I was thinking that you'd start some pattern. But I'm
    glad she didn't--- even though it seemed like she did [I
    was almost hyperventalating at this point]. And I actually
    imagined the baby to be a boy. Just not two.

    And now, all I see are these little asian babies with afros. XP
    I hope you either make a sequel or start on another SC fanfic.
    God knows we need something good to keep all of us readers
    interested in the series.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on November 23, 2005
    I'm sad at the way it ended. I guess I really wanted Fuu to end up with Jin. Well I guess that's the end of my dream. I didn't expect twins. I frankly thought you were going to kill the baby. Well I'm suprised. I can't wait for the sequel.
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