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Reviews for The Electra Complex

By : DeniPie
  • From ANON - Saer on November 23, 2005
    This was a frickin awesome ending! When fuu was giving birth and there was that moment where you didn't know what was going on, I thought she had like a baby with two heads, i was on the edge of my chair! Good idea with the twins, any story i've ever read it's always boy/girl set of twins. anyways awesome job, I totally loved it! SAER
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  • From ANON - Meg on November 23, 2005
    *cries* COME BACK JIN!! You son of a bitch.. *sighs heavily* There's another man that disapoints me.. lol oh well. Awesome, absolutely awesome! And make it both, I know Mugen would be the over-protective father of a daughter, even if he would never admit it and try to play it off, but I could see him freaking out everytime she even talked to the oposite sex. As for a son, heh, I could see him be proud over anything that kid ever does. Belch, fart, kick the neighbor's dog. Yeah, he'd be proud. >_
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  • From ANON - ShinjinMakie on November 21, 2005
    Hey, hey! Awesome fanfic, Deni Pie! I love the characters and the visual eye candy with the sexual tension between Muen and my main girl Fuu! I've seen the whole series too and I have to say u do a hot job at being realistic without bing OOC. That's hot ;)
    Oh yeah, by the way, did you ever get that song 'Abandon' with Katie Holmes, cuz' if ya didn't just email me, and can try and get it for you no prob!

    By the way, I can't WAIT for the next juicy chapter and the sequel. I'm hoppin' on my toes. LOL Anyway, awesome job with the story so far and update soon!


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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on November 15, 2005
    You need to name the kid Musashi... as in Miyamoto Musashi. LOL You just know Mugen would want to name a kid that... (assuming it's a boy).
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  • From ANON - Henrietta on November 10, 2005
    Loved all the new chapters. Your writing is marvelous. Did anyone ever win that commisioned fic for finding the 'Abandon' stuff?

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  • From ANON - henrietta on November 10, 2005
    The whorehouse seen was so twisted, that's it, it was twisted bonding. I guess those two have to take what they can get. (did I mention that I loved your writing?)
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  • From ANON - henrietta on November 10, 2005
    Sorry to hear about your accident. The chapter with Fuu's pregnancy worries was hilarious. Some of the insult that Fuu and Mugen were lobbing at one another in their minds had me rolling!
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  • From ANON - Meg on November 10, 2005
    Omg... Update soon! Pretty please!! *dies* I feel so unfulfilled! Or however you spell it... blah >_
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  • From ANON - Vylest on November 08, 2005
    Two words: Bitchin' story. Four more words. Can't. Wait. For. Sequel.

    Rock on, lil' mama


    Much Luv,
    Number one fan, Vylest
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  • From ANON - eppes on November 08, 2005

    “Yes, you dummy!” She snapped. “I think that’s why they got bigger. I don’t have to tell you how women feed babies, do I?” She asked, her face partially going green with the thought.

    Mugen snorted in amusement at her discomfort. “Nah, I think I got the picture.” He drawled, licking at some of the remaining liquid on his knuckle. “So you’re sort of like a human cow?”


    Damnit, that was the best line ever! Mugen is such an ass...a funny ass, but an ass nonetheless. Love the story!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - eppes on November 08, 2005

    “Yes, you dummy!” She snapped. “I think that’s why they got bigger. I don’t have to tell you how women feed babies, do I?” She asked, her face partially going green with the thought.

    Mugen snorted in amusement at her discomfort. “Nah, I think I got the picture.” He drawled, licking at some of the remaining liquid on his knuckle. “So you’re sort of like a human cow?”


    Damnit, that was the best line ever! Mugen is such an ass...a funny ass, but an ass nonetheless. Love the story!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - alicia on November 08, 2005
    Poor Mugen...he gets abused all the time by Fuu...i almost feel sorry for him...but it is funny...good chapter...ALMOST LAST CHAPTER...SO EXCITED...CAN'T BREATH *HUFF HUFF* I was also wondering where you got the title The Electra Complex from...don't worry emailing it or anything just write a little answer to it in your Author's Notes, please. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - alicia on November 08, 2005
    Yesssss!!!!!!!!!!!! Another update! you are awesome! Loved the chapter...keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Cat on November 08, 2005
    OH MY GOD This is the most beautifully written fan fic I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that Fuu stays with Mugen with their tempers they are ment to be together. Please don't make me wait too long for the next chapter. Thank you for this literary gift.
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  • From ANON - Meg on November 07, 2005
    Teehee!! I SO can't wait for the next chapter! Plus I just LOVE how clueless Mugen is. lol All too cute. lol
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