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Reviews for The Electra Complex

By : DeniPie
  • From ANON - Nami on October 02, 2005
    I really enjoyed this and hope for more chapters. WRITE MORE
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  • From ANON - i need money on October 02, 2005
    holy crap this was freakin awesome.....well worth the wait..........im so emotionally confused.....mugen's intentions were nice its just how he got the money.....now that is what you call messing with the reader's head..........i hope fuu can realize that just cause it's mugens baby does not mean it will turn out like mugen, she has a chance to make sure it dosen't............i hope she is able to bond with the baby i mean it will be living inside her for 9 months that is plenty of time to form a bond...........and where the hell did jin go......did he leave?........i so want to know his pov on this.......oh please update really really really soon....please ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2005
    that was great.
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  • From ANON - Rienna on October 01, 2005
    Thank you for this. I'm a die-hard Mugen fan-girl and there just aren't enough stories that do him justice. I like that you haven't softened up his personality just because he's in love. In fact, I think you've nailed him perfectly. I like the direction you've taken with Fuu as well--complicating and building her instead of stripping her faults to two-dimensional quirks to keep her sympathetic. This story doesn't deviate from the established personalities or overall tone of the show, yet it's not boxed in by those things either; you've branched out in a realistic way. On top of all that, it's well written. I’m so jealous you wrote it instead of me. Fucking wonderful--keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Shampoo on October 01, 2005
    *Mouth drops* Dammmnnnn, Mugen!! Of all the people to kill, and in such a abrutal way, he had to rob the man with the pregnant wife! I don't blame Fuu for being horrified by her situation. Especially now. One question though. Has Jin made a break for it and left the group? Anyway, another brilliant chapter.

    ~~~Shampoo~~~
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  • From ANON - Meg on September 26, 2005
    omg... you're never gonna update... are you? *sniffles*
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  • From Raeysama on September 08, 2005
    This Story is excellent. Well written and put together. I really hope that your going to finnish.
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  • From ANON - Lee on September 07, 2005
    Well I can see that this story hasn't been updated in a long while so asking for more would probably be pointless, but I can't help it I'm absolutley digging this story. You pretty much got Mugen pegged dead on, not an easy matter as I've found out with other stories, and Fuu well a little OOC hasn't ever hurt anybody. I actually like her better this way :) If by chance you are still checking your reviews than please, please, PLEASE!!! Write more.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2005
    come on more more more very good
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    This fic is amazing! In particular, I like how Mugen's capacity to feel softer emotions is so awkwardly developing. I am very much looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - OnlyAThreat on August 27, 2005
    ...sigh...I love this story. I think it's so realistic to how they would really act had they gotten together in the show.

    As for seeing the pregnancy thing, once ya mention vomiting a lot it's the first thing I think of. Go fig.

    KEEP WRITING DAMNIT. Please :)
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  • From ANON - Mhika on August 25, 2005
    Pregnant!! I kinda saw it coming but I didn't want to admit it. A child in their sex-hate relationship is just...so complicating. The river scene was adorable. I loved it! Please, please continue!!
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  • From babykakashi on August 24, 2005
    holy..shit....yeah...it was pretty much predicted that she would get pregnant...i mean, come ON..she's been having sex with him so much..ever since the vomitting and the "stopped taking yaro" part...being pregnant was pretty much in the bag. anywho, update soon! ^^ can't wait for what happens next...let's hope mugen will start actually CARING for her...
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  • From ANON - Jaded Minx on August 19, 2005
    Wow,
    Unbelievable, what a dark, amazingly wonderful piece you have here. Excellent job, the chapters are so long and so detailed and you made Fuu's character so complex (which really wasn't done in the series) and you pulled it off. I love it and look forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - EvY on August 14, 2005
    OMG i completely adore this fic. you MUST update soon, ill look foward to it!!!!!
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