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Reviews for The Electra Complex

By : DeniPie
  • From Excel on August 08, 2005
    Oh, this is so wonderful, I'm freaking green with envy. I'm so damn jealous of your writing! So anyway, the story/plot/characterization is amazing. You have them acting just like they should act in their situations and I'm literally breathless with anticipation for more. Sigh, Mugen and Fuu...love it. Update!!!
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  • From ANON - Meg on August 05, 2005
    *cries* Are you EVER going to update this wonderful fanfic?! *sobs horribly*
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  • From ANON - Foof 76 on August 05, 2005
    Wow! All I can say about this fic is Wow! This is so wonderfully written, and I can't wait to read more. Why no update yet? Please don't leave this out there like all of those amazing fics that just never get finished. Even if it takes a while, please finish!
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  • From ANON - sesshy_lover on August 05, 2005
    PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!! ILL DO ANYTHING!!!!... SEE HOW DESPERATE IVE BECOME!!!??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!????? UPDATE NOW!!!!!! ILL BE WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
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  • From ANON - citrus baby on August 02, 2005
    I can't even begin to tell you how much I love your fic. Your characterization, to my standards, are near perfect. Having Mugen fall in love with Fuu isn't hard to believe at all, but there aren't many fics to help convince people of that notion. A fic like this doesn't come very often here on AFF.net. Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. If it wouldn't be too much in your way, could you email me or im me [aim screenname:bi0nne] when you update? I don't check this site daily, but I want to read your update the moment it is posted [hope that doesn't sound kind of desperate, lol]. Mm, thanks.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Trinity_Sama on August 01, 2005
    well you've got another fan for your fic. awesome writing. i cannot wait for more ^_^
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on July 30, 2005
    please update! i really loved it! makes me feel bad for mugen.
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  • From ANON - Shampoo on July 26, 2005
    How did a story this good not come from me?!!! I'm jealous of your writing and addicted to this story. Please update again and humanly possible.
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  • From ANON - rio grande on July 24, 2005
    gotta say, didn't actually expect that. At least I didn't expect it last chapter, I sort of got it the second Fuu started throwing up. in retrospect, it all makes sense, and works well for a fuu/mugen supporter such as myself. either that or it works horribly. I dunno, the way you write is so complex and thoughtful everything has two sides to it. i always wanted you to have them end up together in some sort of permanent way, and guess i feel like mugen now - i won, but on the other hand, i lost terribly. now, other questions arise: abortions. What does fuu feel about them? Clearly Mugen would not appreciate the notion, but Fuu's really the one getting the short end of the stick here, soo... also, Jin: what does he feel about all this? looking forward to the next chapter. peace, rio grande.
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  • From ANON - Kerrie on July 24, 2005
    Awww, poor Fuu! I check back often for updates on this story ^_^ IT's one of the best things I've read all summer. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Henrietta on July 24, 2005
    That was awesome! I loved it!

    You write Mugen spot on, adding a few, well-appreciated, touches of your own. Not only is the sex between Fuu and Mugen terribly hot, but his growing feelings for her really made for some lovely angst. I am not certain if you are planning for her to 'come around' and fall for Mugen, but I surely would like it. You are not afraid to write Mugen as the callous pirate he his - I enjoyed his rough, crude and realistic POV thoughout the story. You're the kind of writer that makes us love the bad boys :). Fuu was great as well. Her background and motivations were well done.

    All your hard work writing this fic is greatly appreciated.

    I see in your AN that you write Inuyasha as well. I'll have to check out that Ginta/Kag pairing soon - how original!

    Loved it - squuueee!

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  • From ANON - Meg on July 22, 2005
    *cries* Oh come on! This is killin' me! I wanna read more! *sobs horribly*
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  • From ANON - fifi trixibelle on July 22, 2005
    Sweet stuff. I think Jin and Mugen need to have some one on one though. I'm really curious about what Jin thinks.
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  • From ANON - Little Emo on July 20, 2005
    I seriously LOVE your story! It's amazing, the relationship complexity is well done. All the character's are actually IN character which is great. And don't worry about people who have nothing better to do then bug you about spelling. Your writting is great and a mis-hap here or there is nothing to worry about. Anyway if you are still in need of a beta-reader I would love to help you out in that. You can e-mail me, and please update soon! This is the first SC story that I've really loved here. I'm going to go have to take you up on the suggestion and read addiction as well.

    Sam (Little Emo)
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  • From ANON - Love Hime on July 20, 2005
    This is great! Everyone is in character and their reactions are very believable, and the sex is, simply put, hot. I can't wait to read more, please post the new chapter soon!
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