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Reviews for Crystal Flaws - Part 05 Crystal Ties

By : LunaHope
  • From ANON - deep serenity on July 08, 2005
    great chapter 7! LOL, at all the pregnant people. Would have liked a little more Serena being a grandmother and how she felt, but can't have everything

    I can't wait for the continuation I can tell already it will be very creative and original

    also can't wait for the Beryl story either, I think this will be a chance for everyone to see what lead her to become so evil....afterall her hate had to come from somewhere.

    Great job!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on July 08, 2005
    An enthralling finale, my dear! Absolutely enthralling! And I can just see the future arguments now as Sirrah gets jealous of Rini(MII) getting to be the next Sailor Moon after their momma - possibly with Sirrah discovering she's inherited her grandpa's rose trick, hehehe... Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on July 07, 2005
    Well, everything seems to be wrapping up nicely. But how many is Ceres having? After all, Castor is one of a set of QUADS!!!! And the human female isn't really made for extensive litters! Actually, this last chapter could have easily been broken in two, the division being after Terrance gets the ring from Endymion and the second half being his trip to see Hotaru at Saturn - which brings up yet another reminder: Saturn, like Jupiter, Uranus, and Neptune, can only be colonized if you use a floating city of Bespin type setup. Gas giant = no ground! Okay, I'm guessing next chapter we finally do a nice long time jump to the birht of the babies, maybe pausing to do Ceres & Castor's/Terrance & Hotaru8's nuptials(and possibly the beginning of relationships between Jun/Jabbath, Ves/Volans, and Pallas/Pollux!). Well, laters!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on July 06, 2005
    chap 6, LMAO, so loved the venus and terrance scene! I like how you protray her, I have always thought she is understated in most people's fics.

    ahhhhhh the soft playful side of hotaru's was great and nice lemon, stupid Terrance he should have come prepared(hope she doesn't get preg, but your story)

    this was a good full chap and excited that theres one more left,
    great job
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on July 06, 2005
    chap 5-wow, loved the kiss scene with hotaru!!!!!!!! LMAO it was so cute and mina is just great in this chap, sorry for taking so long to review love where this is going and about time someone clued castor in!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on July 02, 2005
    Oh, and of all the possibilites of who sent of Terrance, Venus was no where on the list. Interesting talent she's got there. Well, again, laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on July 02, 2005
    Well, that was a long one. At least there's hope for Ceres and Castor. Now, when will the other bros. realize they want to be with Palla, Jun, and Ves? And when will Hotaru realize she wants Terrance? Or is he going to decide to run off after her?! Can't wait for more! Laters!
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  • From ANON - inuficcrzy on June 30, 2005
    love you entire series, it's awesome!

    needed to say that. but now on to the questions. what's wrong with castor and ceres? could it be that something happened, physically, that they weren't ready for? is the tattoo giving him problems?

    and will any of the other asteroid senshi choose a pegasus brother? i think that would definately be interesting!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on June 30, 2005
    chap 4 was great, love that she's a princess in her own right and kingdom! and it was touching that they made it together, Love how MIna was the smart one in this!!!!!!! She is one of my favs

    Oh, and Castor will have to tell the truth soon..... Poor Ceres!

    deep chapter!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 30, 2005
    "NOW a Prophecy?!", to paraphrase "Death Becomes Her"(one of my favs, actually.) Oh, dear, it seems Castor and Cere are having problems of some kind... Don't suppose next time we get to "rewind" and find out what kept him? Well, eagerly await the next chapter, laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 28, 2005
    Oh, my, did Ceres and Castor do something "inappropriate" while on their date? My, but these Pegasus folk do work fast. Hehehe... ;) Laters!
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on June 28, 2005
    Hello,
    I stayed up late to finish reading your story. I LOVED IT! I loved how everyone behaved. I appreciated that you explained your view of Elios' past. I gathered bits and pieces of it from manga and tv show, but still had yet to understand it. Your point of view's explanation cleared things up. I liked how the characters had fun in both elegant/conservative and common/scandalous ways. Elios and Chibiusa are among my fave SM couples. Dang, Elios got me hot and bothered in this tale. His insecurity touched me. I frieked at the past about Darien's past fling with Beryl. I hated her for destroying lives, but pitied her since she did it due to a broken heart. Love makes us do crazy things, both positive and negative. Also, I liked the idea that Elios' earnest, unselfish prayers nurtures the earth. And selfish, negative ones stifle it. I never saw prayer in such a light. Interesting. I JUST LOVE HOW YOU SEE THE WORLD! I pouted at the part where ChibiUsa told Elios never to tie her to his bed. Did she mean it, or was she jesting? Also, I liked that in your vision of the future, Haruka and Michiru were allowed to be together. It saddens me that in this time, our current ruler lies to the world, claiming that our/his kingdom allows everyone to practice their full God-given rights. Yet at the same time, he and his court of yes-jesters divorced many good gay couples, and prevent others from wedding. Joel Osteen, one of my few fave preachers, says that in Heaven, there are various groups of good people inter-mingled.
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on June 27, 2005
    WHAT you can't stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, wow what a cliffy!

    I thought it was great, the whole tatto thing is lovely and creative.

    Did Ceres ....ummm sleep with him and is now his wife and she wasn't planning on that?

    Wow and Serena playing the match maker again! this was a great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 26, 2005
    Hmm, relationships abounding. Promising. And interesting discussion on how the human-form/Pegasus-form transformations work, well done. Hope to see more soon, and are you sure there isn't enough here for a 6TH book? Cause it's starting to feel that way, honest. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenty on June 25, 2005
    well thing are moving along!(chap 2) can't wait to see what Amara and Michelle think of Hotaru dating!

    love the scene were Ceres and Castro(did I spell that right, if not opps) were having trouble understanding what each other meant....it showed how their worlds were different!

    Good job
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