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By : Benwa
  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2006
    all in all, it was very good. one thing though. I am a Harrier mechanic for the United States Marine Corp. the Navy does'nt have Harriers, only the marine corp
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  • From ANON - awesome-o 4000 on July 29, 2006
    Dude, I think I love you! This was effing halarious. Who would have thought that sweet little Tama-chan was a devil worshipper.
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  • From Mic123 on July 20, 2005
    Very good so ar, keep it up
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on July 18, 2005
    i hope that kei was actualy a nin or is that just part of the dream
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  • From ANON - A person on July 16, 2005
    I take TKD as well. Currently I'm only a brown belt, but i've pretty much learned a load of different killing blows already. The "master" believes in telling us how to use our natural weapons and how best to protect ourselves, and I understand the whole last part of what you were saying in the credits. Anyways, excellent chapter, it wasn't as evil as i expected it to be earlier on though :-P. Anyways, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - havenoname on July 16, 2005
    Cool! You updated this fic finally. It's still going good. Don't feel bad about because I still liked it. I think the way you set up Motoko's dream is perfect! So please write more! Pretty please!
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  • From ANON - AJTalon on July 13, 2005
    I'm starting to really like this fic. Please, please, PLEASE continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Redwyrm on July 07, 2005
    This story was funy as hell update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Nameless on July 05, 2005
    Like everyone else, MORE MORE! But also add lemons!
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  • From Mic123 on June 29, 2005
    Very good so far, keep it up
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 28, 2005
    I look forward to see more of this interesting story in the future.
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  • From ANON - havenoname on June 27, 2005
    You made a good chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
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  • From ANON - KC6 on June 27, 2005
    Hey, its good, if you do properly, it can became realy good, the lime scene in Shinobu's dream was good, keep the same level whit the other girls.
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  • From BrianChattillon on June 27, 2005
    Damn impressive chapter 2
    *Glares*
    Shinoubu better make good on her oath and be Keitaro's slut! along With Motoko as Keitaro's secxond slut!!

    Heh the Hina Ho's lol
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  • From narutofanfic on June 27, 2005
    ok this is starting to make sense.

    next chapter plz
    soon
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