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Reviews for Something More

By : DQBunny
  • From ArchangelM127 on April 10, 2012
    Masterful! The original plot is very well put-together and is very consistent with the lore. Your grasp of the characters is quite incredible as well; you made me laugh very loudly on several occasions. It's so very refreshing to see Lina and Gourry's relationship approached as what it is: a slow-building romance between two very complex people. Bravo!

    There are a few grammatical errors and words misused here and there, but that's just me being OCD. If you ever like I'm happy to give it a quick clean-up for you. ^_^
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  • From momijik on May 22, 2007
    Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it and I am glad to find mature stories that are not all about sex. I was really surprised it took all 13 chapters before that actually did the act too!

    I hope you are still writing Slayers stories, good fan fic authors are so hard to find these days and I just found one! :) Keep up the good work!
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  • From anndragera007 on April 20, 2007
    honestly and truly you are a fan of slayers.

    you have their personalities down to a T! i have read all of your stories and found them all to be wonderful - i loved how you had zel teasing lina in this one the most though.

    but of them all i liked this one and a matter at had the best! longer than i normally care for - but so well done that i just couldn't stop reading - the sign of a ture and talented writer.

    keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on December 17, 2006
    I'm totally with what Saemi said. Plenty of Lina/Gourry fics out there, you don't have to look too hard, however! Hardly any of them are of this calibur in terms of keeping in character, and even less have an actual interesting plotline in full swing that is very cannonical with the anime like yours is. I hope you are damn proud of yourself for writing this, it's probably the best Slayers fic I've read. Many writers I've noticed trying to get creative by inventing spells out of nowhere to save the day, most tend to devote a lot of writing to them, even though I doubt many readers care too much about something they'd have to see to fully understand. Point being, I like how nothing in your fic seems unnecessary or over-the-top. Nothing 'cheap' You know? I'm not sure if you invented that spell that the Mazoku used or not, but if you did, at least you avoided going into a whole nine paragraphs of detail. (I haven't seen the entirety of the Slayers series just yet. I believe the last story Arc I watched was the first appearance of Xelloss. It was some time ago, I don't know when I'll get around to finishing Slayers, but I definately will some day, somehow, lol. Point being, thats how I cant be sure of the origin of that Mazoku's spell. Doesnt really matter anyway)
    Update soon and a lot, you have a fan here :)

    Chiao,
    TEOATG&B
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  • From LunarAlchemist on January 26, 2006
    Too great! Well-written and such a cool plot! I know practically nothing about Slayers... I've only seen the first three episodes of Slayers: Next, but your fan fic has inspired me to add all of the show and movies to my queue on netflix! Yay! Please keep updating, I'm very much looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - RVincent on November 28, 2005
    Wow... wow.... that was massive, excelent read. Which I found strange, normally when there are many characters involved in a scene I just end up confused and end up skimming over everything but your writing managed to wrangle everyone into their positions in my minds eye at the same time. Good action, and a very rewarding build up to the hentai action, I can't believe I didn't find this earlier, great job!
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  • From ANON - Zosuru_Wolfgirl on September 01, 2005
    lol liking your story keep it up i love lina and gourry couple and well the and a few others has lina and gourry here too but yours the best!
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  • From ANON - Saemi on July 28, 2005
    finally a lina/gourry story where their in character! Wow I love this story, I hope you continue! Your doing a great job keeping everyone in character, especially with Gourry. Usually everyone thinks of him just being some airhead, when he really isn't! Thank you ^_^
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  • From ANON - Excel (not logged in) on July 22, 2005
    Wow, what a great find. I haven't read a good Slayers fic in a long time and this was really captivating. Update soon, okay?!!!
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  • From ANON - tdk on July 17, 2005
    What?! Only one review?! These readers are dummies not to appreciated a great fic like this. I throughly enjoyed reading these chapters. I definitely can't wait to read more. Please keep posting!!

    ~~~~tdk~~~~
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  • From ANON - mslcat on July 11, 2005
    OH, man, If your going to do what i think your going to do this is going to be fun.
    I'm curious. What will happen next?
    Keep writing. YOu've got my attention.
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