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Reviews for Verhaal

By : YamiBakura
  • From ANON - Heta Noitio on June 28, 2005
    At first I need to say that the last two sentences in the first part are really, really scary. "Here is my verhaal". *shivers a bit* Omi sounds so cold, so distanced... So old. He really sounds like he is ninety, not twenty-nine. That's sad.
    The next part - Mamoru - is short, but kinda happy in the beginning. He has his brothers. But then come those kidnappers, and things go all wrong. I can't say a lot now, except I'd like to see the other stories. And know what happened to his lover.
    I just love the way you make Omi tell this story. It's scaring me, but at the same time it's so melancholy I want to cry.

    - Heta N.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on June 26, 2005
    Fascinating glimpses, and I fear, tragedy. Your writing is excellent, if brief, and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Lia chan on June 26, 2005
    Very good, well written. Its hard to comment, though, there isn't much posted yet. *scolds* update!
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