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Reviews for No such thing as Good and Evil

By : Kyusai
  • From ANON - kagomegirl on August 04, 2005
    i forgot to reply last time this was updated but now i think i shall ^_^ this was real sweet even if my fav pairing is ryu/shu this was a very sweet story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Danyel on July 07, 2005
    Well I just read your first chapter...and I got shivers down my spine. I hope you continue on with this one. Right now I need to finish up the story. Excellent...almost has that 'I see dead people feel to it' without having the 'I see dead people feel to it'. That made no sense whatsoever but it is a beautifully written story so far. Kudos to you!!
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  • From ANON - Blupawz on July 06, 2005
    I can't believe you have that many hits and not one review. Geeze.

    Okay... So, in the beginning it was... difficult... to picture Shuichi as a broken individual.
    Even though Yuki treats him like crap most of time... I think that Yuki lurves him enough... to prevent things from going that far...
    Like, he would rather be in pain himself - then see his lover empty and lifeless.
    Even if he was too busy writting his stories, Hiro would've shown up and bitched him out for allowing Shuichi to become that way.

    I give you tons of brownie points for having a unique storyline though, heh.
    This story is moving along at a nice pace...
    The characters are sort of OOC... but like I said, a different storyline... usually requires OOCness.
    So... easily overlooked.
    Hmm... excellent word choice... Great sentence structure and punctuation...

    It would be nice to see the other characters just because... the rest of Bad Luck and Nittle Grasper do play such a huge role in their [Shuichi and Yuki] lives...
    Even if it is just a small appearance.

    Anyways... Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more ^.^

    ~Blupawz
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