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Reviews for Reality TV

By : Bakurah
  • From ANON - ladyfiend on July 04, 2005
    to give a review saying a story or plot is bad when you've only read the first chapter is pretty childish in my opinion, but to each his own, i guess. anyways, i thought it would a interesting idea if you play out right so don't give up so readily. if you like this story then continue to write it. afterall, why let a couple of bad reviews stop you? have fun! (^_^)

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  • From ANON - AGE on July 04, 2005
    Please write more! I think you should keep writting cause i want to know what happens!Maybe it will get better when the chapters progress! So
    don't give up! YEAH! :)
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  • From ANON - Araki on July 03, 2005
    Usually don't say much, but got to agree with Banana Fingers, but I still have different points. Age thing wouldn't really matter, however this story has many holes. Not Pirates of the Caribbean holes, but more like cheesey holes. A little bit of description to the scenes, the more explanation to why it’s going on and for what reason Eiri would actually go in the first place in order.

    Really, I don’t think any type of eyes or blowjob could ever get Eiri to do something as stupid as reality TV.

    Perhaps a more genuine idea, more realistic on Eiri’s behalf, is in order. If you can come up with a better plot bunny than this, maybe people can give you more credit that you wish.

    Araki

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  • From ANON - banana fingers on July 02, 2005
    sorry to tell you this, but the idea isn't the brightest. I mean, who signs someone up for a reality show just because? Why would Yuki agree to go? He wouldn't! I'm aware that this is fiction, and that it's your story, and therefore you can do what you please with it, but you must know that when you decide to post a bad story, you're gonna get flamed.
    I don't want to assume too much, but I think you're not even old enough to be reading R rated stories, because honestly I don't know how can you consider this a good idea. It's a plotline that would be enjoyed by a thirteen year-old fangirl, and believe me, that's not good.
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  • From ANON - me on July 02, 2005
    please continue sounds intresting

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