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By : Bakurah
  • From ANON - Maraich on May 09, 2008
    Hey, this story idea is really good, please keep it up! UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! *gets chainsaw* Or else..
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on January 26, 2006
    Ok , You decided to wite a fan fic.......so.......get to it . You got to find out what these people are like and have them interact with Yuki and you can have one of the things that Yuki can do something that he can win a phone call from Shu for and he can get all weird on the phone a pull a joke on Shu. Yuki could write some while he is there or have to do weird stunts. could be fun , think about it.
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  • From ANON - Phix on January 26, 2006
    Hello, I kind of like your idea. It's definitely original, and though I don't really think the story is flowing very well now, I think the storyline has alot of potential for you to fill up the loopholes which one of the reviewers mentioned. However, I do feel that you could do alot better if you had a beta, to smoothen out your writing style as well as some language errors.

    Other than that, don't be discouraged by the flames! Keep writing and you'll improve and spot any errors in your writing eventuall. =)
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  • From ANON - SinstralPride on October 30, 2005
    Wow! I just looked at my last comment and realized it was HUGE! Sorry Bakurah-san, fo taking up so much room.
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  • From ANON - SinstralPride on October 30, 2005
    After I commented the first time, I went and read the two comments that discouraged you, Bakurah-san. And I hope you don’t mind, but I’m going to use a bit of space to respond to their “comments.”

    Banana Fingers- Sorry to tell you this, but your “comment” isn’t the brightest. I mean, who leaves a comment that has no constructive value whatsoever, just because? Why would anyone do such an unkind thing? They shouldn’t! I’m aware that this is merely a comment, and that it is your opinion, and therefore you can do whatever you please with it, but you must know that when you decide to post a cruel “comment,” you’re going to get flamed. I don’t want to assume too much, but I don’t think you’re even old enough to be reading “R” rated stories, because I don’t know how you can consider this a valid comment. It is cruel to “critique” someone without even leaving a single constructive comment or a way for the author to contact you. In fact, it is the sort of thing a thirteen year-old fangirl, who is jealous of someone who actually has the guts to post their writing and has a modest talent, would do, and believe me, that’s not good.

    Araki- I was far less bothered by your comments, but your agreement with Banana Fingers was distressing. Sure there are plot holes, everyone leaves something out every once in a while, but if you were going to say something about it you could have pointed a few of them out and suggested a couple of solutions. At least you said something constructive about details and reasoning. However, it’s a shame that you haven’t experienced the type of love that makes a certain type of eyes one of the most wonderful and persuasive things in the world. Bakurah-san states that Eiri-san holds strong, true feelings for Shuichi-san and that that love effects him deeply, why wouldn’t he do something just to please him? It isn’t a dangerous or even particularly difficult thing to do. As for the blow job comment, just let me say this: A truly spectacular blow job has convinced many a man to see things differently… if you haven’t figured this out you are either doing it wrong, or they aren’t really trying. And credit, really? Writers post here to have a place to put their work, to learn from others, and many other reasons, but credit usually isn’t one of them.

    Finally, for anyone else out there who leave unkind or useless comments, please pay attention! Writers post their work here for you to enjoy and comment upon in a constructive manner. Don’t criticize… critique. Don’t say “It sucked!” and nothing else. Tell the author what you enjoyed about their work and honestly tell them what you think needs improvement. If there are plot holes large enough to fall to China through, mention that you think there are some necessary plot points missing and say where in the story the hole is. Don’t like the premise? Don’t leave a flame, just move on to other things or simply state at the beginning that while you “aren’t fond of the idea because…” you do like this and this and that, but this and that could use a bit of improving because... A good rule of thumb is for every fault you point out, point out one thing you like. I think I’ve said enough for one night so I think I’ll stop here. If anyone has a comment on my comment feel free to contact me at: SinstralPride@gmail.com . For those of you who are thinking of commenting on my stories as revenge, don’t bother. As of yet, I don’t have any up under this alias. I usually don’t comment under my pen name, but I may end up writing under my comment name, which I fell in love with. I hope I haven’t offended any innocent bystanders with my Foamy-esque rant. Bakurah-san, I hope you, especially, weren’t offended by me. Please disregard flames and continue writing, I’m looking forward to the mayhem Shuichi-san has caused with his actions!

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  • From ANON - SinstralPride on October 30, 2005
    It's a shame you were discouraged by some rather mean reviewers. I liked your story and I wish you'd write more. I'm not very fond of reality TV but that sounds exactly like the impulsive Shuichi we all know and love. If you want to keep writing this, I'd be glad to beta it for you! Just e-mail me and we'll talk about it. Have fun and keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 23, 2005
    Oooo you need to update. I would love to find out what will happen next. ^^
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  • From ANON - Kage on July 20, 2005
    very interesting...ME WANT MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - EGO on July 09, 2005
    looking forward to reading more!

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  • From Bakurah on July 07, 2005
    Okay Okay I'm writin heh I started writing yesterday needs ta be longer though and I was babysitting my neices for my mother and it took us over 3 hours to get home for a stupid accident that happened in the morning traffic sucks and I still live with my parents and its my mothers computer and *sniff* I only have a few minutes on puter tonight but I'll be on it all day tomarrow Hopefully I don't get stuck on the story again heh well byebyes
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  • From ANON - Willow Osbourne on July 07, 2005
    I like this idea! I hope you go on with the story soon!
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  • From ANON - Ren Senshi on July 07, 2005
    who cares what those assholes say. i think it's a cute idea. keep writing, atleast its ORIGINAL [ that term isn't well known by most fan fiction writers here.]
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  • From ANON - Mihoshi on July 06, 2005
    werrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfc sweewwwwwwwwwwwww
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  • From ANON - Shorty on July 06, 2005
    How a person can give an opinion on such a short not really descriptive story is beyond me. Please continue and lets see what Yuki does to get back at Shuichi. *cough* Yaoi!!!
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  • From ANON - ~~~~~ on July 06, 2005
    This is okay but the chapter is rather short, ne?
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