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By : Lunapokema
  • From Traybell on July 12, 2009
    Like that Sena secretly liked Hiruma possesiveness and Hiruma exacting revenge at the end. Ack the pinkies.
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  • From ANON - Sami on January 27, 2006
    I really really like this. Do you know where I can find more Hirusena? It's soo cute and hot at the same time. I really like all the stories of yours that I've read so far [ just eyesheild 21] and hope that you write more in the future. I'll look for your work. THank you.
    Sami
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  • From ANON - Biokientic on January 11, 2006
    I just realized that I hadn't reviewed this story of yours yet even though I had read it so I had to correct that little error...heh
    I like how you borrow that little plot thingeh from the actual story, with the cigerrette burns, but added in your own little twist and ending. Posessive Hiruma is so smexay-drools- And poor shy little uke Sena. Sounded a little BDSM-type there with the 'Who do you belong to?' Bit lmao, which I also adored.
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on December 07, 2005
    ....Second Time....
    .......The second time I have come crawling back to this, the shortest but possibly best fic of Eyeshield 21, that I know of.....
    ..........................and I, for one, want more.....
    PLEASE LUNA! from this 'Luna' to you, between sisters....between comrades...between fellow lovers of Eyeshield 21....bring it back or tell it all.
    raises fists: COME ON!!!!!!!!!!
    give a gal a break
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on November 29, 2005
    quote: "What's all this ShinHiruma, HirumaMamori crap? ::eye twitches:: I've seen too many fics where Hiruma has been made the uke... Thats. Just. Wrong."

    HAHAHAHAHHA!!! I completely agree with you!!! Hiruma uke?? WTF?? I have just watched the six first episodes (and only one volume of the manga TT_TT) and let me tell you, Hiruma as an uke it's not just wrong. IT'S A F*CKING CRIME. I think this is a really cute couple, personally i love possesive guys ^^ and you just kept them in character as faithfully as possible, this was great! (although no smex, what the--??) ........Mamori with Hiruma?? T_T

    I was going to stop reading after OWARI, but then something urged me to keep on going, and dude, it sure was worth it XD (possesive Hiruma is the best!!! cute and shy Sena is hughable!!! XD)

    Oh just so you know, i do have an account here, just too lazy to log in.
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 23, 2005
    That was HOT! I loooove HirumaXSena!
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on October 17, 2005
    Very Cute, and yes a longer Sena x Himura cross would be REALLLLLLY COOL!!! So, if you are ever so inspired, know that you have at least one very eager reader! It's my favorite pairing, and I think you could do it justice.
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on October 05, 2005
    I absolutly, utterly, and entirely Love you. More, please. This was GLORIOUS. loved it...i loved the end....the only bad part about this fic is that it is too damn short!!!!!!
    Much love, WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!
    Eddie
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  • From Yaoilady on August 20, 2005
    I've recently become an Eyeshield fan and this story just made me melt! I luvs it so! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - --- on August 16, 2005
    Even though I mainly ship HiruMamo, I couldn't
    help but think that this story was adorable.
    Especially when Hiruma called Sena "Chibi."
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  • From ANON - Sivana on August 16, 2005
    That was beautiful fluff. I enjoyed the possessive Hiruma very much. Though the ending was very dramatic o-o I think it gets the point across very well. No one touches/marks what belongs to Hiruma. >:3

    Your right about the lack of Hiruma x Sena fic's out there, so a huggle and much love for you. *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Namichan on July 04, 2005
    *Thumbs up!* Wonderful job! You're right, there just isn't enough enough Hiruma/Sena stuff in english. You should write more! *Nudgenudge* Come on, you know you want to...
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