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By : xSanityx
  • From ANON - Midnight on July 08, 2005
    Wow... Shu certinly was a wreck. Yeah I'm really liking this. (And I'm a girl, by the way ^_~)

    Umm.. hmm... Let me see... Trying to think of some constructive critisiim... In one of the paragraphs, you have the dictor and Eiri talking in the same paragraph... That's a no-no sweetie~ ^_~ Just make a new paragraph where Eiri starts talking and your fine~

    I'm wating for the next chapter~!!!

    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - goldenkinkogirl on July 07, 2005
    this is quite nice, but has actually been done b4 by damphir...similarly..nicely written tho...update soon
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  • From ANON - Midnight on July 07, 2005
    Yay~ Another chapter~ I was so happy! Oh please update this soon! Please please!! This is gonna be so good!

    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - Midnight on July 06, 2005
    Is this the end? O_o I hope not because now you have a great start. I loved how this chapter was written. Please don't be the end!!

    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - Tyr on July 06, 2005
    I like it. ^_^. Angsty, in a way. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter, so do it soon, k? ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Midnight on July 06, 2005
    I just reviewd chaps 1-2 now I see 3! W00T! I'm really liking this! So Yuki knows... How will he approach this? Anger, sadness, a giant blurb of emotion? Please update!

    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - Midnight on July 06, 2005
    I was skeptical at first... I mean Shu cutting himself over Yuki seems a tad overdone. But this was pretty well written. I comend you. Please update this I really wanna see where you take it! Just do me a tiny favor... No killing of the Shu~ *wink* Yuki can make it better please? Okay enough...


    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - Yit-Ha on July 05, 2005
    Interesting plot. Plese write more!
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  • From ANON - Tatijana on July 05, 2005
    i like your story poor shu
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