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Reviews for Tea Party

By : AnimeHuggler
  • From alkuramaneke on September 30, 2007
    This was a really nice story and if you do write another chapter I will for sure read it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2007
    Hey i absolutely love this. You are gonna finish it right? Please let me know so i can come back to it.
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 26, 2007
    AAAAAH! Cliffy cliffy cliffy!
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  • From ANON - wiper on October 02, 2005
    i want next chapters .o)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2005
    oooo....i like...very sweet!
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  • From GoldAngelFish on July 13, 2005
    It's a good start. Consider: how would a human react at a vampire's kiss? While Integra is a particularly strong woman, she might have misgivings about being that close to a vampire's feeding area. Alucard is a very mysterious character, and admittedly fun to toy with in fiction because his motivations are so open to interpretation. One of your good moments was mentioning him toying with the cookie. It is easy to picture Alucard doing such a thing. However, immediately putting his arms around her without much of a prelude seems a bit much. You're going to great lengths to set up an actual storyline, and for that I commend you. Try a different tactic on characterization, and you might find it writes itself. Keep it up! Practice makes perfect!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2005
    ..
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 09, 2005
    HAI!!

    i liked your story a lot, though you have some spelling and grammar mistakes... but i am not the right person to give you advice on this since English is not my first language. everything else i absolutely loved loved loved loved. i will be waiitng for the next chap soon.. and oh! sure! make him wash her ... back, yeah her back... YEAH!!!! +ahem+

    and you know what? i too have a red-coat fetish thing... my harem consists of:

    1. Alucard
    2. Dante from DMC3
    3. Vincent Valentine FFVII (man, i saw him in the Advent Children trailers.... +faints+ that voice goddammit...)

    so you r not alone i completely feel you... (that sounded kinda wrong but you know what i mean)

    BAI IM LEAVING BAIII!!!
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  • From ANON - Alucard\'s Familiar on July 09, 2005
    This has potential, but first I believe you are in serious need of a beta reader. I will gladly do it for you i you wish, this chapter and the one you are working on now so it can be the best it can be ^_^

    I like it though any other way! Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - mslcat on July 09, 2005
    Well, that was interesting.
    Looke what the cat dragged in.
    Check spelling and sentence flow, a few mistakes: woman, not women.
    Will alucard be washing her back then?
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  • From ANON - Selena on July 08, 2005
    Wow... I really like this story. You're following the characters true emotions and behaviors perfectly I can't wait to see a hot lemonXD. Please please please write more soon seeing awesome work like this gives me courage to write my own. I truly can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 08, 2005
    Great story! please make it a lemon.
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