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Reviews for And When The Sun Goes Down

By : GhostHelwig
  • From KatzeRaoul on January 01, 2008
    PLEASE KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY SANZO MUST HAVE HIS REVENAGE FOR WHAT WAS UNJUSTLY DONE TO HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'KAI HAD NO RIGHT JUMPING TO THE WRONG CONCLUTION SAYING SANZO WAS A WHORE AND TAKING ADVANTAGE OF GOKU!!!!! WHEN IT WAS GOKU THAT TOOK ADVANTAGE OF SANZO.
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  • From ANON - Soka-chan on January 19, 2006
    this is SO INCREDIBLY GOOD!!!I read it somewhere and I've read it again, and it's jsut beautiful!!!I love the pairing, and I love to see it from another's point of view.Many of the things you say here are my personal thoughts on the characters, story and relationships...You write it beautifully, with sensitive comments-I LOVE the "I will love you" phrae, specially in that sutiation-and with deep care.You managed to make everyone interesting and in character, which is difficult, to say the least.

    The only complain i have is that you haven't updated in such a long time.You can't possibly know how disappointed and sad I felt when I found this and it was left exactly at the point that the other version was...UPDATE, ALREADY!
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  • From ANON - squirrl on January 14, 2006
    This story is beautiful! I love seeing Goku all grown up and taking responsibility. Will you please write more? I think you're my favorite writer now.
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  • From ANON - Crimson on November 08, 2005
    Come on, I've been waiting for more of this forever! :-) Sorry, i get impatient when something is THIS good and just SITS here. Please write more soon, I really want to know where this goes. It is just so well done and such an interesting premise.
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on September 15, 2005
    This is incredibly good. You’ve done an excellent job with the characterizations and the use to Goku’s voice was superb. The pace of this piece is on target for your style and the subject matter.

    I’m anxious to see where you go with this, but if you have an angsty flashback between Hakkai and a priest, I’ll have to walk away until I’ve written my piece dealing with that. Snicker. Your writing is so good it sticks to me. I find myself thinking about this piece as the oddest of times and I don’t really like 3/9/3.

    Thank you so much for sharing.

    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

    (I’m so far behind on this board it’s not funny.)

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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on September 09, 2005
    *Has just finished reading the endire frist seven chapters* ... *Sitting in strunned and awed silence* ... OMFG you must update... that was... that was just... I have no words. I'm speechless. You are awesome and... please update. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Rai Kourin on September 04, 2005
    okay i just read all seven chapters of your story today and i have to say.... that was AMAZING. despite the fact your making Hakkai the villian... (complete obssessed Hakkai fan) I rather enjoyed that. Hakkai is my freaking husband so this is kind of a bit stupid for me.... and if I wasnt so completely overly obssessed with him i would say.... "THAT IS THE COOLEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!" that's what i would say and that's what I am thinking. but all other thing put aside. the storyline is very good. I expect another chapter just as good as the first seven. Also, another thing I must add. the Minus Wave really would affect Hakkai more so than the others. Wouldn't it? anyways. I've rambled on long enough.
    Very Good Job.
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  • From ANON - Missa on September 01, 2005
    ... Awe... I'm so speechless and loving it. These truly are dramatic times. It'd be easier if Hakkai was accepting and Sanzo and Goku could just do it, ne? I like this story better than all those happy ones more. Hakkai does make the relationship seems wrong, but on sasnzo's side, you feel for him, and especially since Goku is more than willing. It's killing me!
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  • From ANON - k on August 31, 2005
    Ah, so nice. I'm glad I checked here today and saw the new chapter. ^^ As far as concrit goes, perhaps you might want to back off the emphasizing words a bit? It's distracting to have so many words stressed via italics (or lack thereof in flashbacks), it always makes me hear William Shatner reading the text. XD; It's also rather restricting to control the rhythm so much, it makes it seem like you don't trust the reader to understand the flow of your sentences. Which is a shame, because they're quite nice. ^^ I can't wait to see how the story develops, do keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - shikari on August 26, 2005
    ....i just thought of something...what's Goku gonna say to Hakkai? Or do to Hakkai??...uh-oh... more please ^_~
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  • From ANON - shikari on August 26, 2005
    What's happening to Hakkai? Wondeful story by the way. You have me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for more so keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Alexokerry on August 24, 2005
    Oh my god! You are an evil, wicked person! Leave us hanging like that. Seriously, I love your work and can't wait to see the next chapter! You've got a real way with creating images with your words and you have managed to keep the characters true to form and have captured my attention (not like that's a real important thing, i am only one person). I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - jarm on August 22, 2005
    This is just the greatest story
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  • From ANON - Heta Noitio on August 13, 2005
    Wow. Hakkai's so messed up, I wonder what Sanzo will do. What Goku will do. Is he gonna break too?
    I hope you continue soon, I want to know, I crave for more. Your writing style is very nice, it's different from what I've read before - and I've read quite a lot. I could feel the rain outside, feel Hakkai's rage. Changing POVs made a nice effect.
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  • From Moonwing on July 31, 2005
    WOW! Amazing! But it was a bit hard to understand who was saying/thinking what towards the ends. Still, bravo! I can't wait for more!
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