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Reviews for Tears from heaven

By : Silentdepths
  • From Siarra on August 08, 2005
    It's nice to find a fic with this interesting and very rare pairing. Personally I still prefer Schuldig/Farfarello but I like my Berserker any and every way.
    It's nice that you pointed out that you're dyslexic, it makes us slightly more understanding towards your work, but may I suggest that you still get a good beta to look through your works as it is quite messy at points? For example your spelling is more than random and your grammatical mistakes, like the abuse of irregular verbs and odd use of certain phrases, make it seem like English isn't your first language of use.
    Also the story itself could do with a bit more build up since the events unfolding such as they are give the story flow a very inconsistent feel and the constant change in POVs interrupt it even further. I hope you don't think I'm being too harsh on you and you'll accept this as constructive criticism. It'd be sad if I depressed you so much that you'd abandon this lovely little story.
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  • From ANON - Forgotten sunrise on July 26, 2005
    You must continue!!! This is good so far! ^_^
    I want to see how you get Farf and Ken together. n_n
    much luff and stuff.
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  • From ANON - yami990 on July 14, 2005
    this is really good. the spelling is pretty good. please continue . you don't find many ken/farf farf/ken fics on the net that don't involve one or both of them dying right away. it's nice to find one that has a good plot. i'll give you a batch of cookies if you continue.
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  • From ANON - Tinkerhell on July 12, 2005
    I really like your story so far Ken/Far,Far/Ken are my fav WK paring and I really like your characterization so far.But watch out for spelling and grammer mistakes.You seem to make the same ones constantly so you might want to have someone else read through before you post.Not that it was that bad I've read much worse just watch out for "with"you spell it as "whit" and "all" has two l's.please don't be discouraged 'cause I really do like your story so far and can't spell either so just saying you should watch out for it.Other than keep up the good work and update soon:)!!!!
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