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Reviews for Something Missing

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - Jillian on November 11, 2006
    WOW! THAT WAS THE BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2006
    Wow, what an awesome story. I'm surprised, since I never really liked Sora. But I was curious about this story and Im really blown away. Thank you so much! I'm going to have to read more of your work now.
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  • From ANON - Omniskriba on February 01, 2006
    I have to say these are pretty good ("Something Missing" and "For love of Reliability". Very plausible pairings. Situations plausible enough to be believable and implausible enough to be interesting. I thought it was very well written (although it's to "bawl one's eyes out" not to "ball one's eyes out"). Anyway, I will be certainly be watching intently if more updates are to come (which I do hope there will be).

    Oh, and one more thing - it might be a good idea to have the same kind of descriptive detail in "Something Missing" and "For Love of Reliability", especially with the main characters. Taichi was wonderfully depicted (although a numeric height and, perhaps, a numeric... ehrm... size would have been interesting ô_ô) although I couldn't say the same for Mimi, Sora and especially Jyou (who would have been interesting to describe - has he changed physically, is there something in him now that physically attracts Mimi... perhaps he's actually up there with Taichi on ~that~ department?). Just a thought. If these stories are to remain unfinished, maybe I could have these much sought after addenda through e-mail... just to complete the reading experience ô_ô.
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  • From ANON - scorpion05 on September 27, 2005
    gosh this was sooo beautiful!
    i'm so happy that sora, yama and tai were still friends after all...
    i got goosebumbs when yamato told sora, that he wouldn't fight tai... it was amazing written!
    i also liked the thing between jyou and mimi... they're really cute together!
    thanks for writing such a great story!
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  • From ANON - TaichiKoi on September 26, 2005
    Wow...

    Just, wow.

    I really, really enjoy this story greatly. It had all the things I look for in a fanfic. I'm a huge Digimon fan (season 1 and 2 only, though) and my favorite pairing as always been Taichi/Sora. You wrote this beauitifully and I'm sort of mad at myself for just now finding this great piece of work. Seriously. I can not thank you enough for posting this. It was a very nice way to start my Monday morning. Now I go start my day with a smile on my face. Thanks again.
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  • From Reisu on August 23, 2005
    I really liked this one. =) Well structured and all that. There isn't enough good Digimon lemon around.
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  • From ANON - jemimaglory290 on August 15, 2005
    Dear God, this is full-blown erotica. It has humour, it has people biting nipples. Its all very good. Plus you've nailed one of the few reasons a girl would leave their bf for another, a larger manhood.
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  • From ANON - SkittleSama (not logged) on August 03, 2005
    Oh, please don't make me beg for a sequel! The thought of a sequel with Jyou and Mimi may gross you out, but it makes fans of your writing like me suirm in our seats in anticipation!

    I'd be disappointed if you didn't follow it. Even though that Mimi and Jyou were not the main characters in this fanfiction, they some how managed to play an important role in the plot.

    Hoping for more,
    SkittleSama
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  • From ANON - logan on August 01, 2005
    ...... if we're grossed out about it? you know i am left with two opinions of you at this moment (aside from the unneccisary declarations of adoration)
    option one: is that you are very inflamitory by nature. you say these things to INSURE we will reply in mass with heavily punctuated plea after heavily punctuated plea for more. there is no shame in this, and i'm fairly certain you'll be getting just that wether or not it was your intention.
    option two: is that you simply do not grasp the situation we are in here. through this 'single' story you have won legions of zealotlike fans who in all likelyhood would hold ritualistic animal sacrifices if it were to guarentee a followup. congradulations dear, this is crack and you're now our dealer. ^^
    i feel like a traitor for saying this, but in the intrest of constructive critisizms you could probally have stopped this story two chapters hence and came out a little stronger. i say this just in the intrest of being constructive. i loved the bonus footage and would pull a "misery" (the stephen king book in case you missed the reference) if you entertained even the faintest incling of trying to go back and cut anything out.
    the ending would have been more dramatic if cut a little earlier, but on the up side we spent a little more time with tai and sora and got a bit more character development. you can see that the viagra induced indian summer on eX has softened down to a more normal relationship. this does make sense since their first times were pretty much fuled by years and years of pent up lusting. now it's showing a bit more of a tender side which is always nice. i loved the part where tai declaired war on sora's undergarments, it was cute in a tai kinda way. i also was kinda fond of the scene with mimi and sora buying them in the first place. i'm not exactly sure why... ¬_¬''

    as stated in the last review, this fic really does rock. it's giving all the requisit warm-n-fuzzies as well as satisfying on a litterary level (also it has that whole lemon fresh) appeal working for it. it's fun and well made. now all that remains is for you to decree unto us what materials shall be used in the construction of your statue and weather you are pro or against the whole animal sacrifice deal.
    -ja matta
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 31, 2005
    Great finish to the story and i cant begin 2 express how much i luv'd daily updates, i also thought u were gonna say sumthin abuot taichi moving in with her well mimi was gone but meh.

    Great story overall il read and review anything you make in the future :D

    also maybe lik a oneshot sequal wouldn't be bad lik if mimi were 2 surprise him ;) it mite be pretty kool, but thats up 2 u
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  • From ANON - sterlingwings900 on July 31, 2005
    ah! gomen for not reviewing the other chapters! THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! ;3 i loved this so very much! IT HAS BEEN A REALLY LONG TIME SINCE IVE READ SUCH A GOOD TAIORA! the lemon was good, the story was good, you never wasted any time on the chapters, always aiming to please your readers; ID GIVE YOU A 100 OUT OF 10! you dont have to write a sequel if you want. its all up to you. always keep up the good work and hope to see another story soon! thanks for the good read!
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  • From ANON - bluevixen2071 on July 31, 2005
    Oh! And yes, I WOULD be interested in a M/J sequel. =-P
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  • From ANON - AnimeBabesGoneWildWithMe on July 31, 2005
    Effing AWESOME!!! Sure, go for the sequel! =-D
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on July 31, 2005
    ::Gasps:: It's over!? NO! lol It was sooooooo great! And the lemon was still hot, no matter what you say. ;-) As for being spoiled...you deserved it! ^_~
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  • From ANON - SassieLassie11988 on July 31, 2005
    WOW! I actually felt myself tearing up at the end---it was so sweet and the perfect way to end such a kickass fanfic. ^^ And no, I do NOT find the idea of a Mimi and Jyou sequel! I LOVE those two almost as much as Taiora---it's SO cute! ^_^ Please do! Later! ^,~
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