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By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - Dark Alchemist on July 31, 2005
    Great Ending, I sorry to see this story end so soon. About the Idea of a Mimi & Jyou fic a full story with like tewlve chapters might be overkill but i'm sure a lot of people wouldn't mind seeing something in the relm of a one shot lemon just describing her arrival and reconciliation.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 31, 2005
    Your Mimi/Jyou doesnt have to be a sequal. It can just be Mimi/Jyou your take on it.


    Are you canon, mainly? With the way you write, I would love to see how you handled Miyako/Daisuke.
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  • From ANON - The Digital Dragon on July 30, 2005
    at least those 2 are back friends. I just wonder how the rest of the group is going to forgive what's happening (not to mention what some will do to Mimi for what she did to Yjoe just cause he's away for a long long while)
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  • From ANON - AnimeBabesGoneWildWithMe on July 30, 2005
    DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN!!! And so another twist has been made! ^^ Hallelujah! That means there'll be lots more! =-D
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on July 30, 2005
    Wow! Never saw THAT one coming! ^_^ This is such an AMAZING story!!! And, just so you know, AnimeBabes and I always review b/c I'm his older sister, and I MAKE him read it!!!!!! =-P He really DOES like it, though, haha.
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  • From SkittleSama on July 30, 2005
    Did I mention that I want to have your illegitimate internet children?

    I've reviewed this fiction once before when I was waiting for further chapters, and I've got to say that the further this fiction goes, the more obsessed I become with waiting for updates. I am so impressed by the style of writing and how perfect everything is described. The feelings that the characters are going through are expressed absolutely flawless and I just can't get enough of it.

    Just when you think that the story can't progress any further, it suddenly takes a sharp turn around a corner and jumps you. For me, it was the phrase, "Jun's pregnant." I felt my heart go into my throat. That's the sign of an incredible author.

    In most cases, you'd find that when characters cuss or swear in fanfiction, it's out of character and horribly done. Completely tactless. I'm completely attracted to the way that you integrate reality (the use of cussing and other real world topics like pregnancy or cheating or smoking) into the story, but it's still perfectly in character. Nothing is out of place and it's a total -work.-of.-art.- Example; when Matt was looking for the dip that was never there. You went on to continue the conversation, then went back to the dip subject. Beautiful!

    Please update again soon, I'm excited to see what happens to Sora's relationships with the boys.
    And don't send Joe to Cambodia! Have Mimi take him back. He's so sweet.
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 30, 2005
    I rilly liked this chapter since the last 2 were mostly sora/taichi getting it on, not that thats bad :D and this also had a bit of story development.
    im guessin this story will end within the next few chapters unless u plan on goin into the jun pregnancy scenario or jyou/mimi stuff.
    anyway keep it up :P

    -fav digimon story on aff ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2005
    The betrayal. The lust. The love. 1 to 5 i give it a 6
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  • From ANON - Chrono on July 29, 2005
    Another great chapter. The only thing that I have to say is that I think you might have made them a little too proper. It might be just 'cause I remember how they acted in the one that FoxKids used to give. But when you have them saying things like, "Yes, that's how I feel.", it seems to me like it would be more natural if they had said "Yeah, that's how I feel." instead. But again, great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From taidigimon on July 29, 2005
    Just wanted to say(told you I would review again!)...I'm not the evil pervert that my first review made me out to be...This WILL be my last review until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - AustinYagami on July 29, 2005
    Guess who's back? I would just like to say that I like how this story has a real PLOT and isn't just 'let's have sex!'. That's what makes it really enjoyable for me (not that I don't like the 'let's have sex!' stories sometimes. I just like the plot ones better). Hopefully I won't need to review again to tell you something stupid...^^;;
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  • From ANON - AustinYagami on July 29, 2005
    Your story is very good! I love the smut. And there's not much taiora smut here, so I was happy to find this story. I was sad that there wasn't any (smut, that is) this chapter...But you update so often that I'll forgive you. ;) I was coming to read chapters 6 and 7 again (I have your story bookmarked, by the way) and poof! There was a new chapter! I can't complain too much...And I've got to say, I NEVER thought your vanilla, though maybe it was before this story? I don't know. It's good (I say it yet again!)! Uh...I think that's it...
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 29, 2005
    lol i loved the cant break eye contact game and how taichi got hard hearing about himself

    great chappie plz keep up the good work :P
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  • From ANON - Tig on July 29, 2005
    You are wonderful. You seem to know the perfect harmony between smaut and romance. It is well writen and I am pleased with the fact that you really took time to make everything flow. I am waiting for your next chapter, as I am sure there will be one. Untill then, yay you.
    P.S. I am sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism to offer you.
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  • From ANON - logan on July 29, 2005
    god, in what world would you ever consider something like this vanilla? this story was definitly pioneering new middle grounds between cherries garcea flavor and a maltov cocktail. you're a complete nut if you think this is anything short of hot. i believe in constructive reviews, fluffy declorations of blind adoration are great for a syrup junkie, but they blow for a writer who's trying to improve. i'm tryin, but ya know, i am falling short of thinking of a lot that needs improvement here. you have a very nice set of characters in this. sora and taichi both show a tender side tword each other, but you realllly do get the whole lust thing. it's not really an easy sell getting both of those two angles working right. kinda along the lines of having your cake and eating it too i suppose. i guess what i'm saying is that you wrote the characters believebly. the line where taichi debated any sport where there is no running around was just so him! lol gomen, i don't mean to ramble, but you write a really mean story and i would love to read others you've done. i know Afiction net is pretty limited to just the hot and heavy, but you obviously are tallented at more then just knock down, drag out, flesh clawing, matress spring ruining, sex scenes. (very litterary, ne?) so if you are published at media minder or another site, i would very much like a link there. digimon was my first love and it always will have a kind of nostalga with me. *grins sheepishly* remember a little while ago i talked about how i am not a great fan of love letter reviews? well welcome to my hypocricy. i am going to go before i reach the point where this review will require a teardrop-eyed teddy bear and flowers. my woebegone male ego just wouldn't survive that. ^_^ thanks for the indulgence. - Logan
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