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Reviews for Shadow Over the Sun

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2005
    ooooh i likeit, i wanna see more ver. soon.
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  • From ANON - BakaTulip on August 10, 2005
    BT needs more, this fic is so goooooooooooooooooood! It makes me happy for my own twisted reasons. Sadness (in stories) makes me happy. *nodnod* Anyways, I love your writing, I'm rambling... it's 11 o clock... I'm going to bed... MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on August 04, 2005
    Beautiful, touching chapter. The only concern I had about your first chapter was doubt that the honorable Koujaki would participate or knowingly permit such deaths for the Sanzo party, much less Dou permit his brother to be beaten to death. You've not only explained that issue, you did so with great care for this party of characters as well. Wonderfully written, and deeply felt. I greatly look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Nekomegami_chan on August 03, 2005
    I'm definately not disappointed! I thought it was fantastic. I can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 02, 2005
    *sigh* you really know how to make a girl sad, huh? ^_^ This chapter was awesome! You have me just itching for more. The angsty part of me sooooo wants to do an illustration for this. You definitely know how to paint a picture with words. Keep it up! ^_^
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  • From ANON - FiestyRed on August 02, 2005
    Well since you promised the party was coming back, I feel reassured. ^_^ Lovely chapter. And I believe that Kougaji would act this way. As much as he wanted to defeat the Sanzo gang to help his mother, he still respected them and hesitated at moments throughout the series. Great job portraying a heart breaking moment.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on August 01, 2005
    *In a stiff montone* Next. Chapter. NOW. This is the first character death story that's ever held my attention, and it's bloody well EXCELLENT. Do write the next chapter quickly. Offhand, I nearly started crying in both of the chapters. Damn it... *Quick smile*
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  • From ANON - Tab on July 30, 2005
    Wow! Very well done.
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  • From ANON - FiestyRed on July 27, 2005
    Whoa... that was beautiful. Your way with words really made me feel the pain and the defeat that Sanzo felt. More please. Yes, more. Great start! ^_^
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  • From ANON - nekomegami_chan on July 25, 2005
    Very intersting story, well written. I'd like to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on July 24, 2005
    Powerful beginning. Please do not leave it at that point, but come back soon and continue. Sanzo's reflections on his companions, and Hakkai's actions were so true to the characters. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 23, 2005
    I went to click for the next chapter, and discovered that there isn't one. Then, I wanted to cry *lol* I NEED to read more! ^_^ I desperately need to know what happens (and the promise of some Hakkai/Sanzo-Tenpou/Konzen makes me REEEEEALLY excited! There hasn't been enough of it lately *sniffles*)! Please, continue with this story idea! I'll give you fresh baked virtual brownies ^_^ Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - BakaTulip on July 23, 2005
    If you think you are leaving it like this you are sadly mistaken. Mooooooooore. It's so sad, I would be crying but I have no more tears left in me today.
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  • From ANON - NJ on July 23, 2005
    More. Yes, precious, more. :D It's so sad seeing them like that... I wonder how Goku died... scrap that, I don't really want to know.. what happened to them? A random group of crazed youkai? Or something else? I'll be watching :)
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