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Reviews for The Rose Line

By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - Anansay on November 26, 2006
    After laughing myself off my chair more than a few times, and nearly dehydrating myself with tears of laughter, I was leery about venturing into this something more serious.
    I am glad I did.
    From the beginning it pulled me in, and kept me.
    One line--of many I'm sure but this is the most recent--"The minute he sought to change fate, fate began setting motions in place to change things back.” This should go down in the annals of history. It is SO true. Your words are prophetic. Indeed, the entire story is filled with such depth of meaning and warnings.
    I'm putting this in my del.icio.us bookmarks because I have to remember this one. I do.
    You've woven together something quite complication, in fact it reminds me of something Clive Barker might have written, though a bit tamer than his usual stuff.

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  • From ANON - ursweetheartless on September 04, 2006
    omg that was awesome! i got started reading it when i got home and its all of a sudden 6am and im sad that its over. you write so goooooood, and it didn't even (really) hit me that there was a greater proportion of plot to smut than i am usually willing to deal with on these things. Go You!
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  • From ANON - makkura arashi on December 13, 2005
    awesome story!!! it was reallly good!! i love it, i didnt expect sumthing like this on aff, it creeped me a bit but it was reallly!! good!
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  • From ANON - Luciology on November 03, 2005
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story of love, desire, betrayel and murder. You definitely succeeded in creating something different in this universe, something with considerable plot and depth. Well done.
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  • From fairyvicki on October 09, 2005
    This is such an awesome story! I rarely see a plot this original (in any fandom) and it's interesting the way that it's *not really AU*! I was worried for a moment that the story was going to imply that Eiri's and Shuichi's love was fated to doom, but it all worked out in the end! The snapshots at the end were lovely...and I'll certainly never look at Sakano in the same light again! ^__^
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  • From Anastasia on September 26, 2005
    So THIS is where I've seen this story before. I was so pleased to see that you'd moved it to ff.net as well; it deserves to be read. It has such a beautiful and, dare I say without immaturely giggling, erotic quality that allowed it to be here. It is most CERTAINLY not a PWP at all. And so, so beautifully written. I still can't fathom how you came up with a plot this imaginitive. I've called this story, with my friend, "The Queen of all AU's," and I meant it. Anyone who hasn't read this story must certainly should. Tohma lovers, Tohma resenters (even though it's most certainly not all about him!), Yuki and Shuichi lovers.. it's just.. oh, I don't know how to feel. All the couples are sweet. All of them. I can't gush about this story enough.
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  • From ANON - Aymeleh on September 25, 2005
    That was amazing!
    Though...I do feel a bit sorry for Tohma...is that normal?
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  • From ANON - Classy Raven on August 30, 2005
    hey This is sad Shu chan dies,
    pouts in corner
    But it was an awsome fic,
    I have a fic to hate Tomha over again I can't stand that hat of his
    I SOOOOOOOOO LOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE ittt
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  • From Paine77 on July 31, 2005
    I have read the entire story and I must say this is definitely my favourite Grav fic on here so far. I love your originalitly. Daring to do something completely different and making an amazing story! I mean thats what fanfiction is all about, doing things wacky and quirky with characters from our favourite muses. I myself am drawn to unique stories like these ones. Bravo I well definitely look forward to any future fics of yours ^___^

    Sorry I should have reviewed earlier but I've been so caught up with my KxHiro ficcy ^^; *ish shot*
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  • From ANON - Shirubaa Kitsune on July 30, 2005
    WAAAAAAH! This story was great! I loved it, the whole thing! And the snap shots at the end were a nice touch, really. I hope you write another fic soon, I enjoy your style, you're very talented.
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on July 29, 2005
    Wow that was such a beautiful ending...and great story..man your good keep it up
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  • From ANON - BitchyBabe on July 27, 2005
    Holy shit that is the best story I ever read
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on July 25, 2005
    OMG!!!!That is too freaking awsome...please write more...the story is so awsome....keep it up your doing a great job
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  • From ANON - Mog on July 24, 2005
    Brilliant! The plot very original and the fic is beautifully written. You did a good job keeping every one in character and Tohma makes a great bad guy. I hope Shuichi and Eir will end up together! I can’t wait until for the future updates! But don’t make us wait too long.
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  • From ANON - Jeshika on July 24, 2005
    wow... I really love this story XD It's very well written, and free of all the cliches that come in a lot of fanfics. The story is unique, interesting, and grabbed my attention at once. (then again, i think tohma always makes a good bad guy!)
    Can't wait for more!
    -Jeshika
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