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Reviews for Lonely Nights

By : LolaStar
  • From sheraven on January 20, 2008
    Oh, what a perfect way to describe Jin's and Fuu's first time together. Exactly as I imagined it would be, I loved how you had Jin firmly in control, showing Fuu just what real lovemaking is all about. Thank you.
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  • From Chrono22 on September 04, 2007
    I loved this little short it left me hunger for more.

    TaintedInuShemeeko
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  • From ANON - Star on October 10, 2005
    Great fic.! I think they make such a good pairing!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2005
    Your story was so cute! It was really really good! o^_^o
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  • From ANON - nikolyta on September 13, 2005
    Great loved it!
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  • From ANON - hakuryuu on September 11, 2005
    cute little Jin/Fuu fic... Jin seemed a little OOC, but it worked. One thing to be very careful of is being passive... in the first paragraph, you say "a room at the inn was found" which seems awkward... just "they found a room at the local inn" is fine. Just stuff to look out for. Nice fic tho, hope you write more!
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  • From ANON - Fanatic4Fanfiction on September 02, 2005
    GREAT fanfic. I very much like Jin and Fuu, therefore I had more reason to enjoy your story. Your writing has a lot of sensual description; makes you a great author for hentai. Keep at it, man and don't give up.
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  • From ANON - Mhika on August 23, 2005
    Cute story!
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  • From WillowCarlisle on August 22, 2005
    Short and sweet. Made me renew my love of romantic one-shots. Great job. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Brandon on August 18, 2005
    That was the worst story ever! No, I'm joking. That was awesome! It kind of made me want to fuck you REALLY bad! Even though thats how I feel everyday, this didn't help. :)

    Did you read my journal yesterday? well, you should have.

    WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - kitsune on August 17, 2005
    that was so well written and enjoyable. i really hope you decide to add more to this. awsome job.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on August 16, 2005
    I truly loved this story. The one thing I have trouble with concerning this anime is which is my favorite character. Mugen or Jin? ::grins:: If I had to choose I would way Jin.. I love the silent, strong, sensitive, mysterious and sensual type. You captured all of that in Jin. Bravo!!!
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  • From Moonwing on August 13, 2005
    Absolutely beautiful! You kept both characters in character very well. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - havenoname on August 13, 2005
    Awe, that's sweet. I liked it a lot. Jin and Fuu make a perfect couple.
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  • From ANON - Jes on August 09, 2005
    Wow, that was very well written. :) I liked it. Good job, "Lola". :P
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