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Reviews for Barely Breathing

By : befanini
  • From mamarita on May 07, 2009
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5043487/1/Barely_Breathing

    your story was stolen and posted on fanfiction.net by a 16yr old- she also stole one of my stories called All Bets Are Off.... I suggest you notify the site administrator!!!

    DLS.... aka Rita White

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  • From ANON - Jamie on August 20, 2005
    *Rolls her eyes, grumbling* Stupid thing got sent before I said the last thing, lol. I think you need to make your formatting just a bit more fluid, lol. The A, B, C, D, ect., have me going cross-eyed. Snerk. Perhaps longer scenes like you had in the first chapter? *Winks* My previous compliments still stand, lol.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on August 20, 2005
    *Smiles* Your chacterization is much better, nice job! The names you have Gojyo calling Sanzo have me rolling my eyes, lol, but that's nothing to complain about. I can see him saying them, actually, to torment Sanzo. Lol! Slight sap, but it's not like it isn't allowed, heh. Besides, it's funnier than hell, lol! Good job, Befanini- I'm curently wondering if I spelled that even close, lol- you've improved a LOT! *Peace sign*
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  • From ANON - jarmets on August 14, 2005
    loved the first chapter, second and third were a bit confusing.
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  • From ble on August 04, 2005
    OMFG! I'm swooning! So hot in here, nes pa? ~fanning self~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - LadyMichikoCamui on August 01, 2005
    OMFG I WANT TO HAVE YOUR CHILDRENN!!!!!

    i love it obviously^^ i mean im not....---- shutting up

    Oh god i love how you protrayed them!! awesomw!!!!!
    You are teh pwn^^
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