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Reviews for True Feelings

By : Sc00byD00315
  • From ANON - Kagi on August 15, 2005
    ^__________________^ Yay! Lemon! *nice nice nicely done!!*

    NOW!! ---Motto, motto na!! *laughes happily* XD
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on August 15, 2005
    Huge MurTsu fan here. Thanks for writing a lemony fic about these two and your story is coming along great! Only quibble: longer chapters, please! yeah, it sucks when school and stuff get in the way of writing stories so thanks for keeping it up. Want to see this story completed and Muraki and Tsuzuki live happily ever after! ^^
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  • From ANON - Witchy Willow on August 15, 2005
    Hey much better description this time. I really can't imagine how hard this is to
    write. Ergo I review! Ooooh, is Tsuzuki starting to give up? I also liked the
    watch tie in. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Kagi on August 13, 2005
    ASHITERU NA!!!~~~~ *can't wait for more!! ^____^*
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  • From ANON - KyrosMage on August 13, 2005
    Hehehe...."his little rose" I'll bet he's up to something delishously evil...and related to putting Tsu-chan in bondage.....


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  • From ANON - Krazed Kazoo on August 12, 2005
    Dangit... I wrote a nice little blurb, but I accidently pressed the "back" button on my mouse, and it deleted it.

    BAH. I'M TOO LAZY TO WRITE IT OVER.

    Basically, I said it was really good. I like the story, and I've never even heard of these characters before! It's like... "WTF, THIS IS AWESOME!" Too bad my sweet, innocent little KayKay has been corrupted by this perverse world. *sobs*

    But we wants the lemons. We wants the next juicy lemon... WE WANTS IT, WE MUST HAVE IT!1!! *gollum*
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  • From Sc00byD00315 on August 11, 2005
    I don't understand how it is confusing but, since some of you really want a Watari/Tatsumi scene I will write one for you guys. I was hoping that there were some of you out there. ^_^ I will try to get some more chapters out there but as I said before, school is in the way. Since you guys like my story so much I will write an extra long scene with.... Well you'll just have to read and find out. As soon as I post that is. ^^; I'm trying to no jump right into scenes because I'm just as excited to write them as you are to read them. I don't know how long this story will be but, I hope that everyone will read it until I finish. Thanks for your support, You don't know how happy I am to get these reviews. Hope that you will like the rest of the story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Asher K. on August 10, 2005
    *nods thoughtfully*
    Yeah, the plot is going in confusing directions but yet I still love this story to death...*sighes*
    Hey, I say you put some more scenes with Tatsumi and Watari...ya know, =those= types of scenes...*giggles*
    Pleaz Continue!
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  • From ANON - Kagi on August 10, 2005
    Such a lovely story...but WHY did you stop the Tatsumi and Watari action!?!? *sobs dramatically*
    (I know this is a Tsuzuki X Muraki ficlet, but....WAIIIIIIIIIIII~~~! It was so close!! )

    Go Story! Hoorah! ^_______^ Let's get some hot Tsu and Mura action going on, k? ^__~
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  • From ANON - kiokukaiba on August 08, 2005
    Gah, between work and school I haven't had much time to do anything else! Excellent chapters! You're writing is definitely beginning to improve! Keep up the splendid work! I love the letter! It fits Muraki's personality perfectly! I can't wait for some Tsuzuki/Muraki action! *winks*
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  • From ANON - Cody on August 08, 2005
    LOL! I like your story please right more!
    oh! does Hisoka harbor feelings for Tzuski?
    That would be so cool if Murki got in a cat fight
    with Hisoka LOL!
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  • From ANON - Wiggy-The-Red on August 07, 2005
    hey, I love this story, so please continu to write.

    Thank you ^_^

    Ps: even as your first yaoi fic, you are good, belive me!
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  • From ANON - Witchy Willow on August 06, 2005
    Aw poor little Hisoka is all alone. I liked the brief bit with Tatsumi/Watari but
    I would have figured Watari to be a little upset. After all isn't Tatsumi thinking
    about Tsuzuki? Also, I think chapter 3 is fine the way it went. I figured that
    you were making so that Tsuzuki had to first warm up to the doctor's advances
    before more interesting things could happen. See you could have fooled me!
    All in all great update - can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - Toni on August 05, 2005
    Hay Kate. I'mhappy for you that you got reviews =^-^= LOL. Well i may be posting mine soon too. Mwuahahaha. I Still love that scene with Muraki X Tsuzuki, hee hee hee. U BETTER GIVE ME CREDIT. LMAO
    ~*~ToNi~*~
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  • From ANON - kiokukaiba on August 04, 2005
    Yay! Still good! But again, detail detail! You've gotta slooooooow down and give us some imagery! Also, try to use other names for the characters rather than always calling them Muraki and Tsuzuki (for example: Muraki could be the doctor and Tsuzuki could be the shinigami..you know, little names...brunette, blonde -yeah, they say muraki is a platinum blonde *shrugs*- things like that so that the names are constantly repeated.) Give us a feeling for the surroundings as well! (ex: The den was warm, the red-orange flame of the victorian fireplace heating Tsuzuki's face...though this calm air did nothing to relax his nerves as a suspicious feeling rose within him....) you know what I mean? Try describing the surroundings and Tsuzuki's emotions to give us a kind of image to follow in our minds. Remember 'dirty laundry'? Couldn't you just picture all of that? That's the kind of thing that all writers strive for! You're definitely on the right track! This story is excellent, especially for it being your very first yaoi fic! Continue when you can!
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