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Reviews for Nami\'s Dark Little Secret

By : senoritasophia
  • From Lyfe on June 28, 2007
    Was this really on ffdotnet before? If it was, then how come I never knew about it. It's really interesting, I always wanted to read a LuffyxNami that wasn't just sex all the time or drama or whatever. I'm an adventurous person, I look for adventure, the journey, the story in the book. Eh, I should talk too much; the fict just started!
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  • From ANON - Andrew Williams on October 21, 2006
    Great story. Think you could write some Nami and Luffy NC-17 fics on this sight.
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  • From ANON - joseph on July 22, 2006
    im only up to chapter 3 but the sec a evil transformation of a good guy happens. its automatically a great story!
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  • From ANON - nos482 on November 10, 2005
    very good, very good indeed course I've only seen the english version of the show so sometimes the name differences confuse me
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on September 28, 2005
    What a nice treat - to find that you'd updated!
    I really enjoyed this story very much.

    I hope you'll write another nice story, soon.

    Okay, now for the critique part. I thought you did a fairly nice job with the psychology in the last chapters. It wasn't really accurate according to what shrinks really talk about - but since most psychology is guesses anyway, I didn't really have a problem with it. The only comment I had was that it did feel like you were trying a bit too hard to make the characters psyches be rationalized. I got the feeling you were really worried that if you didn't give enough of a reason behind their splits that no one would have accepted it. In reality, I think you could have taken it easier on yourself. Your writing and your love of the characters is why the story is so good. Rationalization wasn't really needed. So relax in your next story. It'll be great!

    Hope this was helpful.
    Kashu
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  • From ANON - The Empress on September 26, 2005
    YEAH!!! This story was awesome! You rock! I totally enjoyed reading this. Ja ne! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Xah on September 23, 2005
    Interesting story so far. But I'm a bit confused as to why Luffy was having sex with Vivi after they reached the temple...I mean was Nami and Wrath just hanging out while this was happening?
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on September 18, 2005
    This took me two days to read all 18 chapters, but it was worth it...
    Are you going to finish it? I wanna see Luffy and Nami happily together!
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  • From ANON - wendy9 on September 16, 2005
    -sigh- I love this story. Always look forward to the next chapter. The twists and turns are great! Every time I think I know what's going to happen, you throw something out there that makes me say, 'Wow. Why didn't I think of that?'. Keep it up and, as always, looking forward to your next installment. :)
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  • From ANON - keket on September 10, 2005
    I am still loving this story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From CelticFantasy on September 09, 2005
    OMFG this is such a great story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Deblas on September 08, 2005
    Great you updated it. I was begginning to think you gave it up since you used to update faster. No matter. Perfection takes time doesn't it? The chapter was nice and long. Just how I like it. Update when you can.
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  • From ANON - random reader on August 18, 2005
    Woot... This is becoming a big story! Lol... I haven't been around recently so I just started to read your fiction today. It took like 2 hours to finish reading what's so far updated. WHAT A FREAKIN' AWESOME STORY! I LOVE IT! Great lemons. I absolutely love the funny twists of the plot/storyline. It's funny to see all these guys "wanting" 1 girl. Well, I pray for an update soon, again! It's a very good story. Plenty of thrills/chills that leaves the audience hanging and waiting for more. Good, no FANTASTIC JOB, so far! Good luck with updates!
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  • From ANON - Me reading ur fic on August 15, 2005
    DARN! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER! X3 i've been reading this non- stop and to find it didnt finish! hurry everyone! review! =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2005
    i love it
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