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By : LaLapin
  • From ANON - Steph. on October 30, 2005
    hey well i read your muge/fuu story, it was great i loved it. I have no idea how u come up with that but it was awsome and I loved every second of it.
    however, i wish that mugen would of DONE HER but he didn't enen though i really wanted him to and i was dissapointed about that. but besides that I LOVED IT KEEP IT UP. GIME MORE AWSOME STORIES LIKE THAT. and GOOD LUCK.

    P.S. would u mind giving me a version that does have then DOING IT. i would love it.
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on October 20, 2005
    If this is your first i want to see you write more. It was a great idea to introduce the couple to teach Fuu how to do what was needed. Loved it!
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  • From ANON - junie on October 16, 2005
    Wow, This was very good ^ ^ !!
    One of the best smut scene+fic I've ever seen before !
    *thumbs up*
    Hope to see more Mugen Fuu Fics !
    Take Care,
    june
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  • From laurabryannan on October 15, 2005
    This was lots of fun. Very hot and very in-character. I liked it. Great first effort!
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  • From ANON - Kinbari on October 15, 2005
    Wow, this is honestly your first fanfic? I could have never guessed. It seemed experienced. I liked the part about having the smaller lemon within the lemon. Bravo. The only thing constructive I have to say is that it starts a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. Well good job, and I hope you continue writing. I didn't look and see if this is complete or not...so if it is, great job. If not, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and thanks for the Mugen/Fuu. [smacks all Fuu/Jin fans with a dishwasher] >_> Anyway. 8/10, great job.
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  • From ANON - nikolyta on September 13, 2005
    Good job, nice plot, well written
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2005
    u should definetly continue~!!!
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  • From ANON - Mhika on August 23, 2005
    Wow! If it was this good this far, I can't even imagine what it'll be like when they do go all the way. And funny portrayal of Mugen too.
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  • From DarkKunoichi on August 21, 2005
    *applauds* Excellent. Par excellence. Not verbose, yet with just the right amount of detail. All characters were kept in character right down to their thought processes- which I liked the most. You got Mugen's thinking downpat exceptionally well. A very good read, indeed.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 18, 2005
    it was well done and i have to say, Myougin was very in character. Impressively so. Most people try to get their characters to be at least a little likeable in motivation, especially with anime fanfics. You, however, chose to let Myougin stay as he is. kudos.
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  • From ANON - extreme_panda on August 18, 2005
    Wow! That was really good! Especially for your first fic! Keep 'em coming (in both senses, hahaha), you horny bunny, you.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on August 16, 2005
    Wonderfully written! ::claps crazily:: VERY in character for both Mugen and Fuu. The story line was sexy and just WOAH! I look forward to more stories from you.
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  • From ANON - caksas_lyrik on August 11, 2005
    Another chapter please!! Awesome descriptions =D Update soon..hopefully it wasn't a one shot..
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  • From ANON - skittles on August 11, 2005
    perhaps another chappie?! loved it!

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  • From ANON - junko on August 10, 2005
    good one! i love fuu/mugen.
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