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Reviews for The Stream

By : LaLapin
  • From ANON - citrus baby on August 02, 2005
    This fic has many scenes and characterizations and character thoughts from another fic on here, 'The Electra Complex'. There's a bit too many for comfort. If you're going to continue, you might want to check that fic out and try to make it a bit your own.
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  • From ANON - Random reader on August 02, 2005
    Wow... It's pretty impressive that this is your first fiction. It was a really lovely, lusty, luscious lemon. =D (Alliteration is fun.) Anywayz, I really enjoyed the your fiction. Good job. Keep up the good work... I can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From on August 01, 2005
    Man, I was beginning to give up hope on ANY lemons involving a Mugen/Fuu romance! Thank god, I was beginning to think I was the only one out there that preferred the pairing. ^__^ I hope you continue... There's so much Fuu/Jin and Mugen/Jin fiction out there...except I don't like Jin that much... ^^; So your fic is a breath of fresh air to me... Did I mention that I hope you'll continue? ^^;;
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  • From OnlyAThreat on August 01, 2005
    Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I couldn't tell it was your first fic, so you did something right.
    The characters were pretty, well, in character, and I think the reason for them hooking up was pretty
    believable. My favorite part was Fuu getting dunked.

    Good job, guy!


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  • From ANON - X-tal on August 01, 2005
    Pretty good. ^^ I enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Sakura on August 01, 2005
    Ooooh, a Mugen/Fuu fic! Such a rare jewel! Akin to the norm, I absolutely adore Mugen and Fuu as a couple, and I would love to see more!
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  • From ANON - ash on August 01, 2005
    this has grounds to be a good fic I hope you update
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on August 01, 2005
    please please please please continue continue continue continue
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