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Reviews for Flying Without Wings

By : miroku2
  • From ANON - Demo on August 16, 2006

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2005
    wow that was great!
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  • From ANON - Anonna on September 30, 2005
    The DrkDreamer referred me, and I must say that I am VERY glad to have gotten the recommendation. Your writing is very good, and I enjoyed the story despite being completely unfamiliar with CLAMP.

    Along the lines of offering feedback, I will mention that I did notice some typos: chiefly the one where "your" is written instead of "you're." I mention this only because I find that tons of typos can really detract from an otherwise wonderful story. In this case, there weren't that many typos, and the otherwise high quality of your writing made up for them.

    Again, this was an EXCELLENT story!
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  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on September 27, 2005
    This is so incredibly beautiful.

    Can't believe you've only had 340-some hits. Every slash fan should visit.

    Can I ask a favor? If you know how to set up 'favorite/recommended' stories, would you write and tell me? I want to put this lovely story in mine.

    Herders4me@aol.com
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  • From ANON - happyberry on August 11, 2005
    Darn you! You went and made me cry! I don't know how you fit SO much into such a short story! Just... so great!
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  • From Irukichan on August 07, 2005
    This is the best Kuro x Fai story I've ever read on AFF or anywhere else. ^_^ The writing is descriptive, the story line is believable, the romance is sweet but still has problems--and just, wow, it was really good. I thoroghly enjoyed ever sentence of this story, and will probably read it again very soon. It's very moving and the sex scenes are sweetly erotic but not too drawn out to interfere with the story. You did such a good job on this and I hope to see more stories in the Kuro x Fai pairing from you!

    Looking forward to seeing more of this and excellent job!
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  • From NarakusPet on August 05, 2005
    Very sad story at times, mixed with some dark bloody moments.
    Then finally some happiness. Excellent fic and great ending.
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  • From ANON - Beryl on August 04, 2005
    Too sweet. Fai and Kurogane are too nice to each other, there is no tension - first time when I slept while reading fanfiction.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on August 02, 2005
    Wows!! What an intense story. I felt so bad for Fai. I was so happy that he has Kurogane as his lover now. I loved the flashback scenes; they fit so well into this. This really flowed so beautifully. I was mesmerized by it. The sex was hot. The emotions were so well written out and heart wrenching at times. The angst by the tree was so sad, yet it fit perfectly into this. The ending was perfect, it pulled the whole story together. I was so glad he went back with Kurogane! Wonderful job on this! You have breathtaking talent!! *Huggles*
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