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Reviews for Deep Blue / Bright Red (Curious Rei)

By : robblindsay
  • From Mic123 on November 06, 2005
    very good so far, keep it up
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  • From ANON - levi diffee on October 28, 2005
    that was very good. this is just a sugestion, in the next chapter how about have shinji take rei, asuka and misato at once. hail to the king baby.
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  • From ANON - Wurwilf on October 22, 2005
    I really enjoyed it--maybe not the most ambitious story I've ever read, but it did what it set out to do and did it very well; clearly written and formatted with plenty of detail. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Dark Machine on October 10, 2005
    Well Well Mr. Rob.... Never had you cut out for this sort of caper but I must say it's good. Very good. Please write more if you have time.
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  • From ANON - Jake on September 14, 2005
    Very well written. I'd say both Rei and Shinji were very well in character. Rei was very mono-tone, and straight to the point, and yet still did a very good 'job' in my opinion. Shinji definately played his part well. Looking forward to further chapters.
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  • From ANON - Zargon on September 03, 2005
    A relatively nice rei\shinji flick. I look forward to updates. One of the facts that seems to be overlooked by most fanfiction writers is the fact that there is a damn tank of nude Rei clones just waiting to be activated in terminal dogma. M/F/F/F/F/F/F/F...
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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on September 03, 2005
    It's a pretty hot lemon that's let down by a bunch of grammar errors. If you need a need a pre-reader, I'd be willing to help.
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  • From ANON - Spikes_2020 on September 03, 2005
    nicely done, i cant wait for you to write more... anyway keep up the good work

    cheers
    spikes
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on September 02, 2005
    Great lemon! althought sorta short it was really well written. I hope you do write those additions you mentioned.
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  • From ANON - AE on September 01, 2005
    Dude, fucking amazing. You rock as a storyteller, at least when it comes to making the sex hawt. ;P

    Some polishing with miscellaneous writing bits here and there and you could make platinum for sure. If you want a beta-reader (assuming you don't have someone already), I wouldn't mind one bit helping you out.

    ...Good God, why weren't any of the hot, quiet girls I knew back then as curious as that?!
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  • From ANON - warpwizard on August 31, 2005
    Pretty good basic lemon. Could use more paragraph breaks. "Shinji colsed his eyes" was the only blatant error I noticed in passing. More Rei would be great, Asuka if you must. I like Asuka, I'm just in a Rei mood right now. :)
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  • From ANON - JWM on August 30, 2005
    Whew! Unusual, but intriguing. I await your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Drake Smythe on August 30, 2005
    Awesome fic. Update with more. Maybe include Misato. What many authors don't exploit is the fact that she promised Shinji the whole deal after he came back from battlin the eva series. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shard on August 30, 2005
    More please. Very nicely done
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    ....... Wow
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