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Reviews for in between a pole and love

By : ryuichisama
  • From ANON - Janaa on September 23, 2006
    please come with next chapter
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  • From ANON - meli on November 12, 2005
    how can you just stop a chapter that way ahhhhhhhhh!! PLEASE please write more soon! I love the story so fare and cant wait to read more!!!
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  • From Ashcat on September 19, 2005
    Its a good start for your fic. I like the premise and it is flowing well so far. Constructive criticism: Running spell check and rereading for typos would really improve your writing.. also slightly longer chapters would also help. Overall its not bad, thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Raine on September 17, 2005
    Haven't read the story, but you need to fix your punctuations. Get a beta! ^^ Cheers!
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  • From ryuichisama on September 16, 2005
    yay im happy that someone actually read it ( jumps around) i m sorry about the mistakes but im happy tHat you guys are willing to help me thankyou soo much . btw i promis to update soon and put in a lot of yuki/shu action
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  • From ANON - me on September 15, 2005
    please update soon i cant wait to see what happens although its probaly yuki i cant wait
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  • From ANON - Midnight on September 14, 2005
    Yeah... I like this fic but it needs work. Alot.

    I'm bored and willing to help so if you'd like just send me an e-mail and I'll beta for you. ^-~ I'm only here to help a you out okay~?

    ~Midnight
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  • From ANON - Haruna_Hakkai on September 13, 2005
    oh ho ho ho ho~ i wish Shu1 become Eiri's personal strip dancer in the future, I LOVE EIRIXSHU!! update soon, ur fic rocks! i want loads of EiriXShu in the future chappies, write more! i want more~
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  • From ANON - Dhampir on September 12, 2005
    It's really hard to read it like that and your grammar needs some work. It's a good story line, but you just need to work on detail and such. Having your dialogue without "these" or something is confusing to the reader as well as some of the run on sentences.

    Sorry if this sounds harsh or anything, but just trying to help you out. I do like the story line and I am intruiged by it, so I will look for the next chapter, but I do hope it'll improve grammar and detail wise.

    --Dhampir
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  • From ANON - mistress_of_hyde on September 10, 2005
    actually you have a pretty good idea for this fic but it's badly written. I suggest that you get a beta reader. One major mistake that you did was not placing quotation marks for the dialogues. Please do so.
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  • From ANON - chocho on September 09, 2005
    You need to use quotations marks around speaking parts (English major, sorry), but other than that I love this story. It reminds of that movie where Demi Moore was an exotic dancer. I was thinking it would make a pretty cool Gravi fic. Anyway, update soon.
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on September 08, 2005
    more give me more how could you just leave me hanging like that? right at the good part too. and who is this new guy? is he hot? is he nice? will he fall in love with shuichi? how does yuki fit into all of this? where is hiro? see all these questions left unanswered!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on September 07, 2005
    very interesting first chapter i like it so keep up the great work and update soon
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  • From ANON - Kurinia on September 07, 2005
    WOW! The first chapter already ROCKS!!! Keep up the amazing work! Really excited to see chapter 2!!! =66=
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  • From ANON - Mu-chan on September 07, 2005
    Shake It Like A Polaroid!
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