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Reviews for Spiral

By : datenshiblue
  • From niara on January 07, 2011
    I really love your story "Spiral", so I find it really sad that you decided to discontinue it. However, I really want to know what happens to our main-characters, so will you please tell me in an e-mail?

    I find it so amazing how tangible you make the pain of the characters seem, and it's so agonizing not to know what's going to happen. Especially Ryoma's and Fuji's backstory had made tear up, because it had been so heart-breaking to see the two characters being destroyed by their own decisions.
    I really, really want to know where you're planning to go with your story and what the future of the characters will bring.

    Sincerey,
    locket-girl
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  • From ANON - ravensfrost on November 20, 2006
    continuation? I'd love to see where this goes. I liked your idea of the difference between being an adult and being a kid. I think its the point where someone will hold u and tell us everything will be ok and we know that their just mumbling comforting nonsense and that life is rarely that kind. I love this so I hope you'll see it through to the end.
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  • From ANON - pandora on November 06, 2006
    This is very, very good. I love the anime, but I've not read much fanfic. However, this one grabbed me, pulled me in and refused to let me go. The story is unfolding beautifully, with exactly the right amount of suspense, questions and angst. PLEASE UPDATE!! I need to read more. All your characters are so wonderfully three dimensional.

    If I have a minor quibble, it would be with the changing tenses, but it's nothing a halfways decent beta can't fix, and it doesn't detract from what is probably the best fic I've read in some considerable time!

    Oh, and can I make a request for Tezuka/Ryoma? And for a reappearance of Ryoga? AND AN UPDATE ASAP!!
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  • From ANON - Liandra on July 27, 2006
    I absolutly love your story.
    Ilove the way you describe Fuji's character for I have read so many OOC-Fujis. I hope you will update soon^^
    Lia
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  • From ANON - ren on January 26, 2006
    this is another great chapter! great work... it is so tragic, i just couldnt stop reading it...you are wonderful! as soon as i see an update, i just jump on it.. i turn off my messengers and i curl up with my laptop mistress. You make AFF a better place! keep it up cause i cant get enough
    Akutsu for student council, Kirihara for president
    -ren
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  • From ANON - Alucard on January 24, 2006
    Not bad at all! Geting down and dirty huh. i can't wait till you give us all the facts and detailes. This is good keep it up.
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  • From ANON - ren on December 29, 2005
    Merry Christmas to me!!!! As usual you are awesome! i had so many feelings during this chapter, and i am awed by your prowess... to say the least. This fic is so tragic, and beautiful, i am HOOKED... please update soon... i will be watching... -ren
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  • From ANON - Alucard on December 28, 2005
    YAY! You fina;y updated! I was almost sure you had quite doing this one and i was sad, but if it takesyou that long to produce something that good i say take all the time you need! I love where you're going with it, the tone, and the mood is everything i want. Keep up the good work and i can't wait till you update again. Ciao!
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  • From Kugatsu on December 26, 2005
    I'm having trouble with the tense but that doesn't make the story bad. I'm not hooked and that disappoints me because teh premise seems to well thought out...

    I'll return and try again once it's updated. Best of luck.
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  • From ANON - kazayu on December 26, 2005
    When I read this fan fic.. the first word that came in to my mind was exceellent. The Writers words are true to the characters and wonderful imagary. it leaves me on the edge of my seat at the end of every chapter thus far. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Eien_Kisaki on November 26, 2005
    Sugoi!!! This fanfiction is sooooooo good! I haven't read a fanfiction that isn't OOC in a long time! I mean, i know the Echizen in here is a bit more violent than the one in the anime, but thats explainable due to the amount of years thats passed between the anime and the fanfic. Plus the fact that i think this will be a Echizen/Kezuka fanfiction makes this fanfic so awsome in my mind!!!! GO! PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'll die if the next chapter doesn't come out soon.
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  • From ANON - suzieQT on October 18, 2005
    Sugoi!!!! This is such a great story, perfectly delicious in all the right places. I am soooo looking forward to the next chapters. Gambatte!
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  • From ANON - ren on October 16, 2005
    this is awesome... i cant wait until you update.. i will definately be watching for it.
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  • From ANON - Motto Motto on September 30, 2005
    I really like your writing style.

    Please Continue
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  • From ANON - Liliath on September 27, 2005
    OMG!! totally awesome!! I love this story, I just love it, the idea is totally perfect, cool, best of all and totally original!! XDD keep it up and update UP-DA-TE~!!!!!!! =^^=

    PS:....whoa...the smut scene got me on fire...literally XDD ah..whoa, I need to cool off *sigh* a pity...okay, going to ron some hundred laps around the house wee~~ outta my way!!!!!
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