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Reviews for Massage Therapy

By : YuukiSan
  • From ANON - Hakuyako on August 07, 2006
    wow, I absolutely LOVED this fic!! There are just no words to express the way I feel about it. . . it was just so. . . AWSOME!!! *o*
    Anyway, can't wait to read more PoT fics from you!!! ^^

    P.S. The Furuba//PoT Outtake was hilarious!!! xDDDD;; LOL
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  • From ANON - Kit on June 09, 2006
    hey i love the story but can you please tell me what senpai and kohei means? plz!?
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 15, 2005
    that was hot ^__^ and i love ryoma just nonchallantly goin back to their homework at the end lol
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  • From MitsuiSelphie on November 12, 2005
    OMG! i love this fic so much >< *mops puddle of blood on the floor* Sorry, excessive nosebleed. XD There should be more MomoRyo! >
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  • From YaoiGoddess on September 23, 2005
    oooo, nice...but you do need some variety in your vocabulary hon. But the overall story was good.
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  • From ANON - Lady J on September 20, 2005
    some spelling and grammatical errors, but overall a good fic!
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  • From ANON - nacht kind on September 19, 2005
    Mother of 'Shrooms. You rock my socks and roll my shoes! There is so not enough support for this oh-so-fabulous couple out there, and I still haven't figured out why!!! Bless you, it was very enjoyable. I wonder how Momo's family will react...and Nanjirho for that matter(becasue we all know he'd find out somehow)....

    Constructive Critisism- Try a greater variation in adjectives and words choice, example-Ryoma did a lot of screaming, and while that is NOT a bad thing, try other noises, like wail or cry(adjective for desired effect) maybe even softer ones for more deviation: keen, mewl, whimper, cry(again, adjectives).

    I don't want to be a harpy about anything, and I really did enjoy it....a lot.....so I'll quit while I'm ahead. Hoping my suggestions aren't irksome, and waiting for you to continue writing.
    ~Nacht

    P.S.- If you ever want a third opinion about your writing, I'd be thrilled to assist ^^
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  • From ANON - BoltStrkye on September 19, 2005
    I am fan of Momoshiro x Ryoma. This is great stroy. more stroy. :)
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