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  • From Shadow1290 on August 24, 2008
    LOL!!! ... no orgy with those four but T/T first time sex?

    ... OH do you know of any m-preg stories with those two?

    ~shadow
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  • From ANON - Chahron on December 10, 2006
    That was really good. I've read some pretty good stuff and I can say that you are not doing bad at all. I really enjoyed it. If I could say one thing about it, it might be good to clarify a little bit on exactly who's doing what. Not that it wasn't hot, but names are okay to use once and a while, even if you did a marvelous job coming up with wonderful ways to describe the characters. I loved it, write some more, we can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Vinya on October 06, 2006
    at last one good Wolf's Rain NC-17. Others ale boring and cliche. Yours is really cool!
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 12, 2006
    well, i liked it!
    nothing beats wolves in heat!
    nyahahaha~
    ooh, an orgy..?
    interesting..
    are you going to continue that, hmm..?
    nwei, loves ur fic!
    ^^

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  • From ANON - Sarong Luv on August 25, 2006
    I really like it was nice I hope there would be more and create more stories (grin)
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on August 25, 2006
    END?! But it was sooooo good! I want another chapter!Toboe was so cute and innocent I loved it. Also Tsume giving Toboe a little help- well let me just say I didn't know weither I should jump up & down for joy or drool. (so i did both. lol) I hope you write another chapter or a sequal for this it was great! And hot!!!
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  • From ANON - JadenLeeFaye on August 14, 2006
    I loved it. The characters fit each other perfectly. I know you would like some tips on how to make it better but the truth is, it is wonderful, it needs no changing. Though a small suggestion? More? *gives kisses and licks for inspiration*
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  • From ANON - Sylvie on February 10, 2006
    I love it! Awesome, awesome, awesome -- well written and so ... awesome! Please try to write more.
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  • From ANON - shimisaki-kun on January 25, 2006
    Please, please continue this! It's great! I really wanna keep reading this!

    Tadashi Shimisaki
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  • From ANON - lijana on January 10, 2006
    I enjoyed reading Storm. Wished there was more!

    btw: I'll point out that you seemed to use the word neglected in place of denied or something similar. You used it twice like this. *constructive criticism*
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  • From ANON - anglevengence on December 14, 2005
    -_-..........XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2005
    I Think you could've improved it by making Toboe a little less ignorant. He should begin to understand what they're doing earlier, in some sort of Epiphony.
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  • From ANON - storyfreak on October 14, 2005
    I love it.
    You have got to add more or make a sequal.

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  • From ANON - Reilon Imura-Matsui Ishioka Miaji on October 08, 2005
    *nosebleed* Poor Toboe... I think he needs a crash course in sex ed version 4.0. I'll teach him!! Kiba and Hige... those horn-dogs! Gotta luv 'em!
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  • From ANON - S.O.S on September 24, 2005
    WOW! I liked it even though I don't usually read wolf's rain-stories, but that was good and that orgy that Tsume thought about.. It isn't a really bad idea for the next chapter.. Or you should write how tsume tells toboe about 'basics'.. or something like that! *w*
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