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Reviews for Little Devils

By : Skyclad
  • From on July 16, 2007
    Great story, I liked both chapters a lot, although the second one was slightly better. Have you been writting other stories in your time between the two chapters? As the second chapter is more thought out and better written in general.

    Please continue to add new chapters, I am very interested in finding out where the story goes form here.
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  • From mobblood on July 11, 2007
    Nice story actually liked the second story a lot more than the first one. It was a lot more detailed, and you threw in a lot of erotic ideas before the actual sex scene.

    Maybe next you could build on the part where Makoto was walking in public with the boys.
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  • From Eyeshield on July 08, 2007
    Very impressive, enjoyed reading both cahpaters very much. I was browsing the Sailor Moon section, came across this story with 10,000 hits. So i thought I'd check it out, no wonder it receives so many hits it's easily the best Makoto story on the entire section.

    Shame that people can't be bother to at least review it. I hoep you are working on a third chapter, if so please don't take another two years to bring it out^^
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  • From UzumakiIno on July 01, 2007
    Wow, super smexy! I really liked this, even though the lesbo scene was pretty short. I especially liked Makoto's corset-thong outfit; lingerie is too underappreciated. Keep up the good work. Maybe I'll see some more one day.
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  • From daz on June 18, 2007
    I guess I should also mention, that this is just an alt account for me, my main account is DeamonX, I posted my last review on 10/2005. Damn long time. Worth the wait I guess ^^
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  • From daz on June 18, 2007
    Hi I read this story and loved it, both chapters weregreat. I hope you will update soon. Maybe in the next chapter, there is room for some backdoor penetration or double-pen.

    Just a suggestion, but keep it up. It was a great read.
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  • From Skyfan on June 16, 2007
    Great to see you're back Skyclad. I read this story almost a year ago, and found it fantastic, sadly I saw there was only one chapter, when there was easily potential for more. When i came back to check my heart nearly stopped. Needless to say I consumed the entire chapter at once.

    Hope you'll continue.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From RettMikhal on June 07, 2007
    It's the greatest story ever. Squared and times ten. I didn't think you'd ever top the first chapter, but you did it in spades. You're a far better erotic author than I could ever hope to be.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Blade Master on June 15, 2006
    Well written enjoyed it very much.
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  • From zacuraotouto on November 15, 2005
    it was a very well writen story and enjoyed reading it several times.
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  • From ANON - knightowl52000 on November 10, 2005
    this is a good story please continue.
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  • From Skyfan on October 16, 2005
    I quiet enjoyed reading this one. For someone who was having a second shot at writing a fanfic, you did surprisingly well, you should definatley extend the story and add another few chapter. I would say that is the best Sailor Moon fanfic I read so far, bearing in mind that Makoto is (used to be) my favourite Sailor Fighter.
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on September 26, 2005
    well, a little better then the last one.........I read it mostely enjoyed it Lita....would have beat them silly though period....and it's a little distrubing to think of such "young boys" 12 or 13 sexually abusing a girl just because.........17, 18...I could see

    anyway I will take the story for what it was meant to be, my only real huge problem is WHY would she leave cum on her face for the father to see? and seriously what is with people, porn or whatever that make men think a woman wants cum on her face? I can even see other parts of the body but on her face? that was the most distrubing thing for me, it ruined the sex scenes for me cause it's a totally turn off to me in real like and fiction
    your writing is getting better though
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