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Reviews for Abstinence Education

By : MadameManga

From ANON - Babsie on June 13, 2008
What a wonderful gift. This chapter is so cool. Only with the Rin´s death so close would Manji open his heart. The way I see it, he really think that she don´t ear anything o what he is saying. And when he try to take her to a doctor, so beautiful. But I really don´t understand or hope I don´t understand...Did Manji really try to cut off his DICK!!!I hope I read it wrong. Because if he is seeing her that way, like his litlle sister, so if she going to be ok he will never take her affraid of to dirt her.I love this story and I will ask you, isn´t about time they two be together? Intimatelly together? Them they can deal wth all the loose ends...but they almost lost each other...it is time to start to live...Again I love this story, can´t wait for the continuation chapter...You are a great writer. Fantastic. Congratulations!!!
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From ANON - Skei-Fyr on June 12, 2008
This is the first Blade of the Immortal fan fiction that I have read that I actually really enjoy. It funny and very engaging with Manji and Rin's relationship. I just love their interaction with each other. I certainly can hardly wait for the next chapter so update soon, okay?!
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From ANON - Babsie on May 20, 2008
OH MY GOD! I really don´t know if I wanted to Manji fuck Rin non sense or not. If he do it they will finally have a new path of worry and problems. If they don´t do it they will be stuck in the same page. Altought I hope that when Manji take Rin he could choose a batter place for her first time and even being rude as Manji is show a little kindness. Afterall we all know that he really care for her. And Rin should use Manji´s jealousy of Anotsu and provoke him :-) Would be fun ! So....what is happening to Rin. Did I miss something? Did the arrow poisoned her? Did the little worms go in to her blood? What would it made of Rin? Would it kill her? I love this story and being fallowing it from a long time. Please keep writting. You are great and this story rocks. Congratulations for another fantastic chapter!
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From ravedthrad on May 19, 2008
Poor Rin... After forty-three chapters she finally has Manji where she wants him, more or less, only to suffer from a piercingly disappointing case of coitus interruptus...
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From ANON - Spoony on May 16, 2008
Okay - I stumbled upon this story when I had the sudden urge to see if there was any BotI fanfiction out there. I have no idea why I thought it - maybe the medication I'm taking for my viral flu fueled my boredom, and made me think of it. Anywho, the point is that I found your story, and decided to give it a shot. I had no idea if the quality would be good, as it has been my experience that fanfiction derived from anime/manga is somewhat childish. Forgive me if I sound snobbish (*snort*), but I've had bad experiences. Trust me! Now, onto my actual review; I don't want to bore you with the ramblings of a sick woman for too long!

This may sound terribly cliche, but in the haze of medication, I'll be damned if I can think of a better phrase, but... mortal words cannot express how much I love this story. Honestly - your writing style and quality is top-notch, and you've managed to draw me into a story and get me even more attached to its characters. You've certainly dashed all fears of rank fanfiction out of my mind! Your characterization of Manji and Rin is spot-on, your fight scenes pull no punches, and your diction is superb. The fact that you started this piece nearly three years ago and you're STILL working on it is mind-boggling; a lot of authors would have given up by now. But I applaud your tenacity, and I applaud this story. You've got a gift in writing. I shall be bookmarking this story and waiting for another update. Of course, I'm going to be honest and admit that I'm looking forward to another steamy altercation between Manji and Rin, but hey - that's the pervert in me talking. And I wouldn't mind a few more visceral scenes to appease the twisted sadist in me. What can I say - I'm a girl of simple pleasures. And I do so love cheering Manji on.

Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to an update!
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From ANON - Babsie on March 16, 2008
Oh My GOD! How happy I was when I sw that you update the story. I like very much this chapter, specially the moment where Ryonosuke declare his love for O´Hama and the way Manji and Rin react. I would love to see that Rin and Manji admit that they love each other at least from themselves. You transcript, a very well done way, the conflicted emotions between the samurais, the honor, the senppukku, that die are a better way to choose than live in deshonor. You are doing a great work in this story. I wouil love to see in the next chapter a little more interaction between Manji and Rin, afterall Manji already have his ravanche and what will he do no? Send Rin back to Anotsu? Don´t think so...I realy love it and you make me vey happy every time you update. Please don´t let this story unfinished. Update as soon as you can and keep in mind you are wanderfull. Congratulations.
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From ANON - Aidreal on February 24, 2008
This story is amazing. i read through the whole thing in two days :D and i have to say i certainky wasn't disapointed! keep up the good work, i look forward to the rest of the story :)
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From ANON - Babsie on February 11, 2008
OH MY GOD!!! I´m so happy that you don´t give up on this story. I check on it every week looking for an update and than, here it is. Thank you. This is an awesome story you are writing. To the chapters...fantastic...as all the story this chaopter runs deep on the emotions of the charecters. I started to read and coundn´t stop until the end...and now I WANT SOME MORE PLEASE! :-) I keep imagining how they will find a way to act on their fellings...it seams to me that they really love each other but coundn´t act on it. And there was the fight...the things that O´Hama accused Rin was fantastic. Now I wanna see how they will deal with this...will they fall apart? will they be more close to each other? will they assume, at least to themselves their fellings? I don´t have word to say how great it is. It is so hard to find good stories on Blade that when I find one I don´t wanna let go :-) Please update as soon as you can...I´ll definelly will be waiting. Congratulations!
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From ANON - ashez2ashes on January 03, 2008
I dunno, maybe it isn't different, maybe I'm just not remembering it right? -_- There's so many chapters to remember... Oh just ignore my crazy ramblings from before.
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From ANON - ashez2ashes on January 03, 2008
What the heck? You totally redid chapter 23 didn't you? I know I'm not imaginging it... I'm argh! It's all ovelry melodramtic now, instead of subtle. -_-;; I'm usually your loyal cheerleader, but... It's very frustrating when an author goes back and dramatically edits previous chapters long after you've read them and this isn't a simple grammar edit, the dynamics have changed a lot.... I'm not imagining am I? I could have sworn the Anotsu would try to marry her thing wasn't so blatant the first time around...

And if I am totally imagining these changes I apologize.
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From ANON - momo on November 13, 2007
awesome T_________T
I havn't enjoyed a fic this much in a long while
please please please update because there is a tragic lack of manji x rin fics

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From Valiant on November 12, 2007
I had almost forgotten about this wonderful story until I scrolled down my favorites and found it. I am so happy I did!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Rin better kick some ass!
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From ANON - Babsie on November 02, 2007
Fantastic chapter. Really good. Can´t wait to see how this fight between samurai's daughter will end. You are a very good writter. We get envolved with the plot and can't stop till the end, but we always end with an "I want some more" taste in the mounth. I would love to see Rin claming mujin as hers...to everyone. I'm a sucker for happy ends... :-) You are doing a kgreat work here...please don't let it unfinished. Update asap. Congratulations
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From ANON - Carol on October 20, 2007
Wow, please keep this going! It's an incredible fanfiction, I haven't read something this well written in a long time!
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From ANON - Shatterwing on September 01, 2007
Love this!!!!

Please don't drop off the face of the planet and break my heart!

The writing is good the plot is good hell the sex is good what more can a
fanfiction junkie ask for!!
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