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Reviews for I Believe in Happy Endings

By : TaintedDesire
  • From ANON - Rayvenfire on October 18, 2005
    That was great. Kind of a surprise ending but I still liked it. I'd love a sequal.
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on October 14, 2005
    Lol stupid web page!

    I only got it to the fact they were married! and some other stuff! It skipped a lot of the text

    DAMN! DEMANDS A SEQUEL! It's horrible!

    Write more! lol. j/k
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on October 14, 2005
    YES MAKE A SEQUEL AND WITH RYUICHI!

    MY HONEY RYUICHI! LOL!

    Lovely ending. Maybe have Shu-chan and Yuki adopt a baby or something.

    Awaiting sequel.

    VtV

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  • From Ashcat on October 12, 2005
    Chpt 10 post script via reviews: OMG.. please do NOT let shu be pregnant.. that is such a cliche overdone bull shit thing (at least with your story set in the future you could TRY for believablilty of it via technology) but again.. please DONT write the sequel if its a pregnancy bullshit.. I too noticed the stomach thing and tried to pretend it was just sensitive.. maybe Shu is sick and Eiri is trying to move on and not allow himself to be hurt by him? ... Oh BTW I saw how you said they were only happy a short time (paraphrase) or that their time of happiness was so short.. good slip in to warn of the ending!
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  • From ANON - Kenz on October 12, 2005
    DAMN YOU!
    It was good and you gone a messed it up soemthing tells me
    you got major writers block so you finshed it off...
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  • From ANON - JSMC168 on October 12, 2005
    pls make a sequal i love the story
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  • From ANON - Chikky on October 12, 2005
    Oh... you better make a sequel to that. That was really sad *crys*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2005
    I know this is ur story and stuff but for some reason it give me an idea. How about shuichi get pregnant and aqnd he founds eiri and who ever in bad with him. And tell eiri that he is going to have his baby and that he pack up his things and leave and he takes of his wedding ring and head it to the other guy and say he is ur's now. And walk out the door and eiri is in shock and can't say anything. Shuichi and his brothers make a band called bad luck and K is their manger and eiri see what he lose. eiri and shuichi seprated, and but they share the baby but when the kid gets a little older like around five he come up with and idea to try get them back together. But eiri has to do all the work trying to get shuichi back. I want to see eiri right after shuichi leaves he start's cry and realizes what he lose that would be great. I know i write a lot but am not saying do it my way but i know that u came up with something on ur own. I want just writing down with i think it's ur story but it was an idea on top of my head but i did love the story and u are a really good writer keep on writing. Thanks
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  • From ANON - xunxin on October 12, 2005
    oh wow. *sniff* that was a sad ending.
    the wedding was great
    how romantic.
    but like i sad, the ending was sad
    poor shu
    let me guess.....tohma?
    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
    you better make a sequel!
    please, i need you make a sequel.
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  • From ANON - chocho on October 12, 2005
    Thart sure was an unexpected ending, but then again not everything does end happily ever after unfortunately. It would be great if it did, but that's not how the world is...*sigh*. I would love a sequeal, but as a writer, I know how hard it is to come up with one. So, your choice. I would love to see what happens, but it's fine as is as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2005
    that was depressing. thanks.
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  • From Suzakugrly on October 12, 2005
    You said, you're prepared to be yelled at... well, I won't yell... But I do DEMAND that you get your but moving and wirte a sequel! There are to many questions open!

    Why is Yuki cheating on Shu, if he loves him so much, like he claims he does?

    Has this something to do with Touma?

    Why does Shuichi automaticly protect his stomach? Is he pregnant or what?!?

    Well, I'd be happy to find a sequel to this story sometimes!

    Love
    Lord
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2005
    Hey i like the story till after the honeymoon. But what happened i feel bad for shuichi and I hope u do the story on it but make it another story that goes with this. I want to know who yuki is cheating with and how it happened and is he and shuichi going to work their problems out. pleases plases plases do it.

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  • From ANON - Jade on October 12, 2005
    Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed reading it. The ending makes me want to see Shuichi leave Yuki behind and have Yuki realize what an idiot he is (sorry...I'm just so typical). I don't know if I just mistook the whole part about Shu protecting his stomach...but I kind thought that he might be pregnant. A sequel to this story would be greatly appreciated.
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  • From Ashcat on October 12, 2005
    Chpt 10: Ok, I'm not sure what to think. That was a definantly unexpected ending. I will have to go back and look for the 'clues"... I guess saying "its too good to be true that Yuki was nice" is a way to look at it. How much time has passed to "present" I mean did Shu have a few years of happiness or was it over as quickly as it started? I would LOVE a sequel to see what happens.. my vote is for evil Tohma, it would be kinda funny in that Tohma would get Yuki in the end instead of the other way around where Shu normally comes back after a long time and Yuki dumps whoever he is with for Shu (in other fan fiction I mean). Either decision you make, please write more, you are a very talented writer!
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