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Reviews for Old Gods

By : Light7
  • From ANON - Antidaeophobia on December 22, 2006
    Fantastic! I like your take on Alucard, it's nice to have him sweet and emotional for a change. I think Alucard's not as evil as people make him out to be, he's not so bad.
    Anyway, great fic, very well written with plot and character adaption. I liked that you didn't make everyone so serious. There were some spelling errors, a quick look through on spelling errors would be good.
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  • From ANON - Antidaeophobia on December 22, 2006
    Your fic made me laugh. Alucard's hilarous...totally in character too. I can absolutly see him saying those things. I always pictured him as your wrote him. Great job!
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  • From ANON - DreadNot on October 14, 2005
    I'm enjoying this very much. I had to stop after your prologue however, because I was hit by a plot bunny, and I didn't want to go any farther in your story yet for fear of ending up with something derivative of your work. When I'm done writing my story, I look forward to coming back and finishing reading this.

    What I've seen so far does need a proofreading by a third party. You have some word misusage such as: To young to die, to old to live forever. Which should be: Too young to die, too old to live forever. It's a relatively minor issue in many instances, but when writing for other people to read, those things can snowball into more than just trivialities.

    Don't let that throw you, though. I still enjoyed what I read, and I intend to come back and finish the story. That's a lot more than I can say about many of the other fics in the Hellsing section of aff.net. Good luck to you with your writing.
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