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By : JadeHeart

From ANON - Danielle on November 03, 2005
HOLYSHIT.

*wibbles*

I need them to be together! I'm in tears! Holy FUCK that was, oh god, that was... the single best Gravitation fanfic I've EVER read. You're driving me crazy!! I need more. Oh god, please stop tormenting Yuki. I'm seriously, honestly crying right now. This story is so passionate. I...fucking..love it. Please, please, pleeeease don't make Shu take over!!! PLEASE. Oh God, Yuki, I love you it'll be okay, I promise. @_@;
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From ANON - muu-chan (again) on November 03, 2005
It ate my review. X.x Half of it anyway. ;_;

*prevents self from falling asleep*

As I was saying; I like Shu! Shu as in the brainwashed!Shuichi very much :D I think it's a refreshing take on brainwashed!Shu :O~ Or I probably haven't read a lot of that but, getting back; it's just neat seeing Shu with pretty much everything core!Shuichi but really just not the memories. It's Shuichi, but not. Ditzy, dumb -- not suddenly dashing, dark, brooding, Eiri-like. I'm a little bit suspicious of Annette but that had to happen, I think. Eiri's... inner turmoil is amusing to see though I kind of... lol, feel like laughing at all his angst ^^; Because he's so cute when he's angsting and you really can't call its OOC, and if it was, just a bit because Eiri has... a flair for self-centered angsting *babbling* Or at least anime!Eiri does...It makes me wonder, with Shuichi being at a pretty stable state atm, how he'll remember. Because, it just feels like Shu has forgotten quite conviently and doesn't have any trauma or anything like that -- like he's better off left alone and that just makes it... harder for Eiri. Uwah :O I'm curious about what caused the crash too and can't remember if you'd addressed that. (I'm hoping for one Muraki hijacking the plane in hopes of kidnapping Shuichi only to fail j/k) Hoping you can answer those random questions soon with more chapters...

Tohma's choice of action was perfectly IC btw, while I think without Eiri in the equation, he would have exploited the media (any publicity is good...) and ultimately killed two birds with one stone by letting the issue explode and then finding Shuichi and restoring him... but with Eiri, he had to consider Eiri's reaction... the impact on him. Though, I still, honestly, think those nasty rumor mills and gossippers are smarter ;-) Has anyone begun to get suspcious in Japan? Even if Tohma had Suguru and Hiro on his side, and Shu's whole family assuring everyon Shu is fine, that is just as official as an actress going on TV and denying something that everyone just knows is true :O Still, without confirmation it's still...a rumor but I would think it'll start to get harder to keep up :O Shuichi IS famous no? And in Japan, just like in America, celebs are expected to appear everywhere, everytime, especially when you're on top of the charts :O no?

Uwah, that's all for now. Will wait for more. I wanna write. Will try homework. *is inspired by your fic to continue writing* One day! One day! X.x

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From ANON - muu-chan on November 03, 2005
I think it would have been interesting if you had, if not written the whole thing in, put in more hints :D! Mentions! *likes long-fics* Methinks too that anything is possible from any angle; mwaha! So you could've had that and worked in some complication and your fic would still be delciously long :3 Of course, those are just tiny details T_T, your story as it is now is just wubble~ Uwah. I feel inspired, I wanna write again because it's been a while since I last read a good Gravi fic ;3 Muu! Keep up the good work XD D~

PS, >d *wonders because she can't remember if Shu's iPod was orange or not*
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From Reyn on November 02, 2005
Hooray! Another chapter! I took my own sweet time reading it cuz I didn't want it to end. LoL. Y'know, I found it weird that Shuichi would own 3 ipods, considering those things can easily hold well over a thousand songs, pictures, and files (I own one and it currently contains about 200 songs, close to 100 pictures, about 37 files, and finally the entire Sukisyo anime series, as well as 4 episodes of the Loveless series, and it's nowhere close to even being halfway full). But I guess Shuichi is jest weird like that.

I'm suprised Shuichi knows how to cook without blowing up the kitchen! I'm guessing his new girlfriend taught him that? But yeah, now you've got this idea stuck in my head of Shuichi saying he doesn't want Yuki to contact anyone and Yuki actually complying to his wishes and shocking Shuichi. But then that'd be awful cuz Hiro is sooooo worried!! Oo! 10 dollars says Ryuichi would go to try and find him anyways. Actually, now that I think about it, Ryuichi now lives in New York (that's where he went at the end of the manga). I suppose it's too late now for them to bump into one another, ne?
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From MariaBubbia on November 02, 2005
AGGGH! DOOD, you totally gotta make him remember. I'll cry. Seriously. I feel really bad for Annette, though. And POOR SHU! I mean, how is he gonna deal with it when he realizes he had Yuki as a lover, and now he has Annette. He's gonna have to choose. And since he's REALLY in love with Yuki, he should choose him. Just my opinion. I like seeing Yuki happy, and Shu is happy when Yuki's with him too. It'd just be wierd otherwise. WOOT! WRITE MORE! LOVE IT!
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From ANON - Ukera on November 02, 2005
O.O! Holy shit.... I have missed a lot of chapters.. ^^;;; uh excuse my lanuage. I haven't been able to get to a computer in a while.... I go and check this and holy whoa you have like 8 or so more chapters! they find a lead on Shuichi, Tohma heads back to Japan, Yuki even finds Shuichi and talks to him and....Wow!! T___T I'm sorry it took a while to get a review in >.>

Well to the point! ^^ This is still awesome-ness! I like the direction you have the plot going. Example, you had Tohma head back to Japan, you had Yuki meet up with Shu and I must say you portrayed Shuichi excellently! Not being able to remember and still you leave him with his bubbly personality sort-of O.o;; I also love how you link stuff like from the beginning to later chapter, Like how he brought the Ipod with and uses it later ect... Ouch! Poor Yuki! I could just see you were going to add another person in there that would be close to Shu's heart, kinda obvious ^^;; Ayway..the point of this statement is I feel bad for Yuki...

Shu Chan?? LMAO! XD! I love it! That's great ^^ I get a kick outta that. Well it seems he now has a lot to consider with Yuki showing up, and I can't wait to see where this is going!!!! Well I hope you can find inspiration to update soon! This fic is my ultimate favorite! You're awesome-ness! When I get time I'll go back and review the chapters I didn't review!!! Good luck to the next chapter and thanks for the last few! Reading this has set me off in a great mood! (eh ^^;; sorry this was a lil longer then intended and I ranted more then my share >.>)

KUDOS! ^^

-Ukera
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From ANON - Cait on November 01, 2005
I'm really enjoying this fic. That weekend without any updates was hard on me. ^_^

I think at some point, once Shuichi has his memories back, and perferably right after he gets them back, he needs to walk up to Yuki and smack him across the face for that "a friend" comment. Cowardly lying bastard!

Also, I hope you plan on resolving a lot of the inserted characters, like Jim (and the cast of FAKE), by the end. I just don't like the idea of leaving those guys hanging after they were such a big part of the middle of the story. I also kinda wanted to see Ryo as a (closeted) fan of Eiri Yuki's novels, but I guess it was just not to be. ;)
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From Reyn on November 01, 2005
(glares) You broke your pattern of updating everyday!! I was sitting there for TWO WHOLE DAYS worried off my ass that something bad must have happened to you and then you coming skipping back and continue updating as if nothing ever happened! GAH!

Well, now that THAT'S out of my system...I'm glad Shuichi at least feels SOMETHING when Yuki walks away. I mean, back when they first met and didn't even know each other, Shuichi felt a whole rainbow of emotions for Yuki. Jest cuz he lost his memories doesn't mean he can't go through the same thing, even if it is on a smaller scale, right?
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From ANON - pikapikashuchan on November 01, 2005
*cries* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's so sad.
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From ANON - Samishii on October 30, 2005
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Why isn't there a next chapter?! What happened to the button? OMG this is good. I just found it tonight and thought "Why not? It's worth a shot." And then - wow. It is soo good. I really like the way you've characterized Yuki. He's in character, which is amazing because sometimes it's really hard to write angst with him in character. And when you started to mention characters from Fake. God, I went into a gigglefit so bad. Evil, evil author though with that lemon. I don't think I even breathed through that last chapter. So sad! I love this story! Keep writing. *bookmarks* You're fabulous! I don't know if I can stand the wait. ^_^
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From Reyn on October 30, 2005
Seems like even tho Shu lost his memory, he hasn't lost his ability to be really really late. LoL. Eek! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - annie on October 30, 2005
Damn it!! This is so good, its torture! They better end up back with eachother because it can only be ShuxYuki and nothing else!! I
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From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2005
more! i demand more! please... please give me more... not that i would fall into begging or anything... but yes... more!
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From Reyn on October 29, 2005
Holy cow! That was hot! O_O You did an excellent job, drawing out the teasing, moving smoothly into the sex, and building the climax into everything it's suppose to be. I applaude you!
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From ANON - bobii on October 28, 2005
okay...i started reading this story tonight (i love it so much!!!!!) and i just got through with chapter 9 (yes...i have that much time on my hands) newho...i was reading it and when jim started talking about di. i was like o.o FAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!

heh...i'll shut up now, but first this story rocks. *nod*

~bobii
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