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Reviews for The Key to My Heart

By : JadeHeart
  • From Reyn on October 27, 2005
    -_- I've got tears in my eyes! That was so sad! ARGH! Suddenly one chapter a day isn't fast enough!!
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  • From ANON - Reikachan on October 27, 2005
    hi. um the twists and turns in this story have kept me chained with curiosity. pls...just make sure that it ends well for the main characters!!!
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  • From ANON - Ultimecia029 on October 27, 2005
    No!!!!!! You can't do this to Yuki. My heart is breaking right along with his. I thought I was sad when Yuki thought that Shuichi had died, but now I'm depressed. Please let there be a way for those two to get back together.Please let there be a happy ending for the two. And please update soon. I know that's a lot of "please's" but I really love this story.
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  • From ANON - muu-chan on October 27, 2005
    I like this story :-) Good description and angst.. my only problem with it is.. well, how do I put this? Shuichi's an artist, a singer - famous only in Japan or not, the Japanese media would probably go into a frenzy about an up and rising NG singer going down in a plane crash. Not to mention, a crash with unknown and suspicious reasons... I think too that, given his status, a lot could have been done to find him as soon as possible. The government's response to the plane crash victims may be.. uh.. bad, but still! Tohma could have done a lot more than go in stealthily... and do everything manually. Practically the whole of Japan knows Eiri Yuki in the Gravi-universe, and even more knows about their high-profile relationship... so.. I know it may sound cliche to introduce people who, wow, know about the J-pop going-ons and are fans of yaoi or crap like that but I was just really.. bugged by that tiny little detail.

    Moving on, I really think your portrayal of Tohma is just downright loveable...err, I just love how you... make him.. him :D The OC was fun! The fact that it seems like you've really... researched on the stuff you've written just... waah! My vocabulary is really bad so... finding the right words to describe my thoughts is... tough but I hope you get the picture :-)! I'm interested with Annette, for some reason, I have a soft spot for plotdevice!Mary Sues..... (don't take the label in the bad way, I've come to affectionately call all OCs as Mary Sues and Gary Stus :-))
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  • From ANON - annie on October 27, 2005
    Damn it!! Don't play with us like this!! This is really good, but Shu and Yuki better have a happy ending with eachother or this will just break me. Ughh! This is torture!!
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  • From ANON - chocho on October 27, 2005
    Okay. That was very depressing. I knew once they found Shuichi he wouldn't remember them, but...Oh well. I hope it all works out.
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  • From Reyn on October 26, 2005
    Hmm...it felt like Fake sort of overtook Gravi in this chapter. Not that I'm complaining (seeing as how I'm a big fan of both), I'm jest pointing it out is all.
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  • From Reyn on October 26, 2005
    (recalls a quote from the Petshop of Horrors series) "All Asians know kung fu." That little line was running through my head the second Yuki and Tohma sensed danger. So needless to say, I wasn't too worried about them. Although, Yuki picking up the gun and ready to murder the thugs was a bit of a suprise at first. I wasn't expecting that.
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  • From ANON - tirrnanog-pigtails on October 26, 2005
    This story is awesome. I'm really enjoying reading it, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Yuki! Poor Shu, I wonder what's happened to him? One thing, for future reference, an embassy is only in the capitol of a specific country. In major cities, other countries keep consulates, so it would be the Japanese Consulate that Yuki and Tohma go for information because the Japanese Embassy is in Washinton D.C. You're a great writer, and this is one of the best gravi fics I've ever run into. Please keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Ukera on October 25, 2005
    GAH!!!! I'm so sorry for such a late review when you already updated three new chapters T__T Sorry! School I would rather sit at home reading fanfictions all day then go to school >.> Anyway O.o;; I've never read Fake before, but doesn't matter this fic rocks either way.... still no trace of Shuichi huh? I feel really bad for Yuki, they've like done all that uber hard serching... OH! The fight scene in this last chapter was awesome-ness! ^__^ Who knew Tohma had it in him! Also, I was uber happy a few chapters back you had Tohma showed his perspective of what he thought of Shuichi, I dunno I just thought hearing Tohma say he actually didn't hate Shuichi makes me think that's awesome. >.> I'm such a freak. Anywho I'll try to keep up with the updates as good as I can with school this week ^^ I'll stop ranting anyway! All these last few chapters were great! Please update soon! Can't wait!!

    -Ukera
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  • From Reyn on October 25, 2005
    LoL. "How do you say 'let's fuck' in Japanese?" That would be something Dee would say. Once again you've done a great job. Tohma's dry wit had me laughing, and the entire time they were discussing Shu's incompetant language skills I had this one scene from the manga running through my head of the time Shu got kidnapped to New York and K went to rescue him and while fighting with Rage he gave Shu a twenty and said to go hail a cab and get out of here, and Shu didn't know how to hail a cab so he jumped out in the middle of the street to get hit by a cab and began blabbing on about how scared he was and how he needed to get out of here and the poor cab driver was absolutely terrified of this crazy asian speaking kid....oh man, that had me laughing.
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on October 24, 2005
    oooh wow i started reading this on ffnet and i find it updated here Yay!! please update soon. i wanna see shuichi reunited with yuki soon ^__^
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  • From Reyn on October 24, 2005
    Oh man, that Ghostbusters line was awesome. But what really got me laughing was Yuki's reaction to Dee and Ryo. That was too farking hilarious. I'm assuming we'll eventually be bumping into Bikky as well since dinner will be taking place at Ryo's place.

    I wonder how Shuichi is doing on his own in New York...last I remember, his English was pretty much nonexsistant...maybe they should search for him in China Town
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  • From Reyn on October 24, 2005
    KYA! You've read FAKE!!! I knew it!! As soon as I saw 'Di' I was like 'THAT'S DIANA!!!' (cheers)

    Right, so now that I've got that out of my system, I'm off to read ch. 10...
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  • From ANON - Ultimecia029 on October 24, 2005
    Wow, I go away for two days and all hell breaks loose. Shuichi dies, then he doesn't. They find him,but he's gone. They track him down but he's not there. I'm loving this story!! And now the boys from FAKE are here. You've made my day!! I hope Shuichi is okay and they find him soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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