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Reviews for The Key to My Heart

By : JadeHeart
  • From Reyn on June 22, 2006
    I tried leaving a really long review last time on gur.net, but then my comp decided that I had enough of the internet and I lost everything when I clicked the 'submit' button. (decides to try this again)

    This story was beautiful. So beautiful, that it deserves an epilogue. I nice long, smutty, lovey-dovey epilogue (hint hint)

    I really did enjoy this story from chapter 1 all the way to the end. I loved how you slipped in some of the anime's style to keep it true to it's roots. I loved the emotions you put me through. I loved the slight crossover with FAKE. I loved that you were able to get Ryuichi dead on. I love that you didn't rush the story and didn't rush to get Shuichi and Yuki back together. There was a bunch of other stuff I loved as well, but now I can't remember it. You really did do a great job with this story. I'm glad I was able to follow it right from the first chapter. And I'll be more than happy to follow it right through the long, smutty, lovey-dovey epilogue as well (nudge nudge, hint hint).
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  • From ANON - Tirnnanog-Pigtails on June 19, 2006
    Thank you so much for this story- I have to admit that I've been lurking since chapter 10 or so, and have loved so much of this story. Admittedly I was hoping for a nice steamy lemon at the end, but since it was cute with the shouting match, I'm satisfied (sorry, bad pun...) The story did get a little dull and frustrating while it was in Qubec, but that actually suited Yuki's mood at the time, so it fit the story. I'm glad you finished- when aff went down I was afraid I'd be left waiting on it forever. Thank you for a wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - *silvertail* on June 10, 2006
    i love absoultely love ur story u should update more i wanna know if shu-chan remembers yuki-chan
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  • From ANON - blue on June 09, 2006
    Hey umm you won't update anymore or what? i really like this story but with all the messing around they have done with the website it seems everyone froze on one spot will you update?
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  • From ANON - Kelly on February 12, 2006
    I love this story. It feels like I'm actually reading a novel because of its length; this is awesome! I really wish Yuki would hurry up and tell Shuichi the truth. Though I have to admit I like how you seem to carry out the plot really far, it keeps me wanting more. When this fic is complete, I will feel satisfied, as well as a little saddened. This story is just so heartwrenching. I can really feel for Yuki, though I, have never personally experienced anything of the sort. I can just imagine what it would be like to spend so much time, and work so hard to find the person you are so much in love with, but to only find a person who no longer even remembers your name. This is one of the few fics I've ever read that has actually made me cry (on more than one occasion too!). I am dying to read the next chapter. Stay inspired! :)
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  • From ANON - Kagura on February 09, 2006
    Oh man, this is one of the BEST fan-fics I've read in a long time. I really hope you continue it soon. I want Shuichi and Eiri to get back together ASAP! I don't like that girlfriend. She sucks. =P Oh plz have Shu and Yuki back together soon.


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  • From ANON - fantasylives on February 02, 2006
    I just finished reading all 31 chapters and I can't wait for more! This is definitely one of the best gravi fanfics I have read. The characters are kept in character very well and the story line is so believe-able. Great work!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on January 26, 2006
    Wow, I really like your story...so sad that Shuichi doesn't remember Eiri.
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  • From ANON - Tyson on January 25, 2006
    Great chapter but plez put Eiri and Shuichi together PLEZ! lol but anyways update soon plez
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  • From ANON - Suki on January 25, 2006
    Yay, an update! But I still want more! I'm really enjoying this story! *demands more* just kidding. I can't wait for someone to slip something about Yuki to Annette. I thought when they were talking about the pocky thing someone was going to say something about knowing Shu's sexual preference from a young age... damn... oh well. =)Thanks for sharing this story with us, and I look forward to your next update. Post immediately *cough* when you've got time (but soon I hope) Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From Reyn on January 25, 2006
    (blinks) (rubs eyes) (blinks again)

    Holy cow! You really did update! Hooray! I must say that while I was reading the first part of the chapter, I couldn't help but snort at the idea of Shu NOT freaking out when he met people like these. And then when I read the part about K wondering if the timid and nervous Sakano was a facade and I laughed out loud remembering him in a shivering ball on the floor when K first entered the room.

    I feel really bad for Yuki. It looks like he's already given up on ever getting back his Shuichi...
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  • From ANON - Lisa-chan on January 24, 2006
    YAY!!!!!!!!! You updated. I absolutely love this story and hope that you are inspired to write the next chapter soon. I look forward to it!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 24, 2006
    Well, I didn't mention it before because I thought I was just imagining it, but since other people mentioned it I kinda felt a need to add in my own little comment. I was also wondering about the vibes at the end between Annette and Suguru. I have to say while I don't like her now, I think she might actually have a chance in my book, and in a few others, if she was with someone else and not Shuichi. Not trying to lead you somewhere with that comment btw. I just thought that might be an interesting twist and a way for people to see Annette without being....influenced.....(can't think of the word I'm looking for but that's close) by the fact that she's basically the one major barrier between Yuki and Shuichi.
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  • From ANON - Cait on January 24, 2006
    About time we got another update.

    I honestly don't understand how people can complain that the story isn't rushing to its conclusion. If anything, most fanfiction moves too fast and is over too soon. Patience is a virtue. I know we all want to see Yuki and Shuichi back together, especially in a fic where Yuki's true feelings are so openly loving and understood, but this isn't about "something gets in the way of Y/S and needs to be removed." This story is about the trials of love, life and the realities of human interaction. I'll look forward to reading however it turns out. I hope everyone can find some form of happiness in the end, whoever they choose to be with, or how they choose to live their lives.

    Anyway, Sakano is written brilliantly here. You really brought him to life in this chapter. The scene between Yuki and Shuichi's mom was also brilliant. Also, I can just see Shuichi's ultimate decision to return to Japan having more to do with Yuki's intention to leave soon than anything else. And I can't wait to see the Shuichi/Ryuichi reunion. They got it right in this chapter when they said it'll be something to see, and probably drain the energy out of everyone around them (maybe even us spectators).

    Of course we all understand the realities of work/school/life/inspiration and all, but don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. ^_^


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  • From SeveredWings on January 24, 2006
    Thank you...thanks you....THANKS YOUUUUUU!!!!!! I am so in love with this story you don't even know! I am so happy to see that you have updated, and please keep up the good work. I really hate it when an author just gives up the story in the middle. It would be horrible if you were to do that, this has so much passion to it. I can't wait to see how Yuki and Shu's interactions are going to be like when they get back to Japan. Or Annette's for that matter. *Winks*...mnnn I wonder if anything's going to happen between Annette and Suguru mmmnnn? They seem so nice together! And, it's great that Shuichi's regainning some of of memories. Especially those of Hiro, but poor YUKI! Okies enough drabbling on my part. BUT, if you ever wanna chat just email, I love talking with new people, 'specially those who like gravi!

    SeveredWings
    SeveredWings22@yahoo.com
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